Quiet Poetry Lounge : And it whispers your name...

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Softly the sound of the splashing waves, trees bow and birds sing as though they are calling your name.

    The glow of your skin is radiant.
    The touch from your lover is vibrant.
    So much to your surprise, it's right
    in your eyes.

    And it whisper's your name...

    Who is it whispering like butterflies
    flapping their wings?
    What is this exasperatingly euphoric
    thing?

    And it whisper's your name...

    Tenderness is your sustenance
    and understanding is your thirst
    quenched. And security and warmth
    are with you in each and every inch.

    And it whisper's your name...

    "When love calls you better answer.."
    You have to catch your breath and let go. Give in to the thrill of not knowing.
    And be off "On the wings of Love".

    And it whisper's your name...

    And you finally recognize the voice as your own. As you settle in the arms of the one that you love and every where they are feels like home....

    LOVE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    BJS(c)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whisper's your name !
    in the arms of your love
    sistah this was very beautiful flow
    i was embrace inside every line
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my brother!

    It's pure fantasy, but it's my take on what finding love is like...Soon, I will achieve that level of trust and security with someone, but as for now, I will save my Passions for my Poetry!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    i hear you whispering
    and poetry holds your heart
    the passion for new love
    maybe sooner then later
    thank u for sharing this poetic ride
    down poetry love lane
     
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    i feel all warm and fuzy inside
    it's a beautiful piece all jokes aside
    i've known this trust
    didn't last
    but hindsights reflects that if given another chance
    i'd choose the same man
    much respect j.
     
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    oh my sista y sho did do it with this one :) got me all sensitive and smushy lol ;)
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sista!

    I can always count on you to read, relate and respond...the fundamentals for a well functioning Poetry forum in my humble opinion. I am home recovering from the last back surgery so I have not been able to sit up long, but for you...well you know!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    This is very beautiful...
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much for reading and responding!

    I so appreciate your taking the time to read and respond. It means a lot to me. I know most women can relate to this sort of poetry and I get a kick out of reading your responses. Please forgive me for not being on the board to read other's work, as I am recuperating from my final back surgery!
    Blessings On Your Houses!
     
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