Black Poetry : "..and it is so" (a jh and angelicsage col-love-aration)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ln a blooming stillness, as improbable as it may seem
    The question enveloped me suddenly
    And l am compelled to ask
    How may l love you?
    For the moment in which we became
    lt has now recoiled upon me
    l now desire relentlessly

    Have you no thought, my Dearest Lover of how l would conform
    lnside the grandeur of your soul, would l splendorly unfold
    Exude as a halo, l would
    upon the glory of your mane
    You alone, my sole, soul exclusive

    Have you no thought to examine my heart for the perfection sought
    For as improbable as it may seem, Could l not be?
    The water, the sun, and the very air you breathe?
    To complete you? My life's journey now...
    All else is but empty... tasteless

    l am new, since............... you
    Belonging yet unclaimed
    lndeed, nothing could ever equate you

    lndeed, nothing, Except! The acceptance of my last breath
    Vowed only to you


    my passion can no longer sleep
    my queen
    as one day love brought question to my mind
    ~ls a diamond amid sand and stone hard to find,
    as improbable as it may seem?`
    then came you...
    did l see you in a dream or is this reality?
    (by chance both)

    with such consistence
    and faith as the moon providing me light
    what is it about my night that you call day,
    as oxymoronic as it may seem?
    passion has been awakened
    by your dove
    spirit falling on me like a breeze
    we share
    air
    water and sun
    orbiting hearts around the center which is- forever
    a surrender of peace

    l am one since.......... you
    all the worlds l subdue and bring to you
    as my hedge and protection clings to you like no other
    as paradoxical as they say our love seems
    the radiant sky
    created by our kiss...
    and it is so....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yesssssssssssssssss!
    dis what i'm talking bout
    the sweet soundz it pose has my heart racing fast
    y'all done did it here.........wow!!!
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't you just imagine this being read at your wedding?

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    this is incredibly tight...
    this tag team duo
    is numero uno...*as my heart beats a lil faster*
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    from the heart
    2 souls exchange
    the vow of love
    wonderful
    loving this feeling
    deep from my heart
    very nice:love:
    Peace
     
  6. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. I agree I can hear this read at a wedding.
     
  7. triniti424

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    this was a "vow" worthy flow right here :)
    make a sista wanna have a man LOL :)
     
  8. angelicsage

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    On behalf of jh and I - Big Thanks to all of you for the luv you've shown on our collab.........although I know J'hiah will hit u back soon but for now...

    Rich....I don't know that I've ever made you say wow...Thank you! and the heart racing too......this is just too much to handle! Much luv


    Playwitit.........u got me on that one, lol.....Much luv, Angeli


    Khasm...much luv to u my brother.....coming from the "Poet" among poets......and yes it's a rather nice duo, if I might say so myself. Peace


    Bluewater, glad you felt the depth of this piece, I often feel that the piece has not achieved... if it does not capture the depths of the heart! Thanks


    Alize, girl u know I'm always happy to see you.......Thanks for the love!


    Triniti.........girl I can agree, with the way my partner be scribin...have a sistah searchin fa real! Thanks so much fa da luv!
     
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    you both collab so beautifully together :) :heart: this was soooo beautiful
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa :jawdrop: y'all got me all open with the presence alone...

    thanx angeli for doing this.
    you're all dat and a couple of wingz :D
    we shall "col-love-arate again...

    Swt T,
    thanx deep poetess,
    think l'll go read your peace...

    triniti424,
    ever heard of the escorts? they'll take you where you wanna be :wink:
    thanx

    Alizentang,
    thanx for the compliment. Maybe Angeli and l will connect this to a wedding one day :wink:

    Bluewater,
    never told you l dig the name (and the flowz 2)...
    glad you felt us on this one...
    thanx

    Khasm,
    the metamorphic incomparable poet,
    your presence alone lets me know the job is well done..
    thanx

    Play,
    yeah, l can imagine it being read at your wedding :D
    thanx queen

    $R,
    my fellow escort in rhime we have a job to finish dun..
    thanx for the flight-by

    j'hiah,
    man l wanna be just like you one day..
    oh my bad... forgot who l was for a minute :D
    ~playin'~

    thanx fam
     
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