Black Poetry : And I'm Teaching Her...

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  1. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I blessed my script of thoughts with Ghanja and ghetto symphonies
    I blew tree hits in her face tempting her to taste the weed.
    Go ahead inhale the perfume of the herb coming out of me.
    Telling her not to be like we, :nono:
    I'm sucking her in rapidly
    into my cycle of irresponsibility. :sand:
    While praying she'll realize she's apart of God's entirity.
    Built strong, beautiful, and uniquily.
    Trying to show her she can't search the road I've been past :rolling:
    preparing for the journey I must travel to be free.
    She wants to imitate what gives me peace and sirenity
    never knowing that it may confine her to just be
    instead of becoming devine in her divinity.
    I use haze as an escape from this laced defeat
    of self recklessness and mischeat
    and still she's watching me. :weird:
    Kiss the L wonderin what it would be like
    and how good it will feel
    all the while She's remembering the weed spots
    she could cop from
    to fulfill the void and the need.
    Caught up in my contraption
    she's indulging in the calm before the storm:devil:
    not preparing and never knowing
    that where I been was a struggle and standing now I can see.
    But all I ask of her is not to be like me.

    Copyright ©2004 Poetic-Soul-Sista
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow, poet. It's amazing how we don't want others to do the things that we do or have done. Hopefully they understand that it's all love.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this drop flow on...
    really enjoyed

    Angel
     
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    i mos def feel you on this joint...no pun intended...:lol:
    if my future seeds choose to smoke weeds
    i just hope they do it with responcibility...
    glad to have you back sista...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And hopefully those you teach can learn from your experiences, and not make the same mistakes. Keep bringing these thought provoking flows.
     
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    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    had a discussion on this subject with a friend awhile go...we totally disagreed lol. But this flow gave me a different view. I stood in his shoes and thats poetry. Nice flow girl...very nice!

    -Muse
     
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    awesome flow i felt ya vibe here keep teaching

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    very thought provoking flow. when i read it, a visual came to mind: a mother/aunt/sister smoking weed in front of her impressionable and quite young daughter/niece/sister. it's hard to tell the ones who look up to us not to do the wrong that we ourselves are doing. it confuses them. that's why we have to be very careful about what we do and say in front of them. if they think it's ok for us, then they'll start to think to think it's ok for them too. we gotta be careful! nice flow.
     
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    i really enjoyed this flow...
     
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    Sista...WELCOME BACK HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
    missed you sista indeed :)

    And what a way to end the scribe...that she WONT be like me wow smh that is a mouthful...ya know sista...you dont HAVE to be a stranger :look: :)
     
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