Black Poetry : And If I Could Be The One

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could be the happy lady in your life
    I would cherish you
    And kiss your lips so softly and calm your soul
    If I could be your sweet song
    Would you marry me?
    And would you protect me from the danger
    Trying to take over me?
    If I was everything to you
    Could I be your quiet storm
    Reflecting on how you have never encountered love like this before
    And how you want to become a better man
    And change
    Now that you know

    Well let me tell you so
    That I am a woman
    With pride
    I am still looking
    With a lot of love to give
    Yet am at times afraid
    And why are the ones who want only to have peace
    Always the ones to feel so burdened
    Maybe I'm to kind
    Maybe I'm to weak
    So I know you're thinking about someone else
    Even when I look into your eyes
    I can see that you dream of her
    And wish it was her you were holding in your arms
    And I just can't explain the torment and anger of knowing you have another love
    The rage and lonliness I've felt for so long
    And to you I've given up
    Wish I never rushed
    One day I will have something all mines
    My mind is clouded with worries
    And I can not find
    Another to keep up with my stride
    How I yearn
    To be the only one
    And not left behind
    How I yearn
    As the dreamer
    To see my dreams come to life
    Always hoping always promising
    Because I know what I need
    Please, somebody rescue me....
    I have shared my soul
    And I'm looking back
    Wishing we had never met
    That I would have never let
    You
    Into me
    I'm seeing what's important to me
    I want to come back to reality
    And I'm ready for love
    Is it ready for me?
    As i wait patiently
    Lord Jesus mend my heart
    And take these broken wings
    And take these broken dreams
    And take this shattered soul
    This disturbed woman/girl
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if only u knew da answer of thee
    ya heart would open freely
    into dis fantascy of bliss
    yes i can be yo protector
    keep u safe
    luv u warmly in my grace
    if i could be he
    whom so desire
    but back to reality
    i seek da words so heard
    am i ready for love is love ready for me !!
    answer yet unheard ..........
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are simply at a stage
    in the midst of love you're feeling rage
    things seem not to turn out right
    intense feelings you try to fight
    but Desert you gone be ok
    I know for I was once this way
    Love is a many splendored thing
    and yet burden it also brings
    hold on - keep your head to the light
    Universe will prepare your Knight
    in shining armor to save your day
    be patient - He's a heartbeat away...


    1:heart:
    2fish
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to you both i really appreciate you replying to me in the midnight hour, just one of those post scribin to release some stress
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's all love Desert Storm...I've loved your vibe since back in the day- and I'm glad we're all still together!

    1:heart:
    2fish
     
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    desert sista ....this was good....


    i wanted to say that the words i atted to youre poem as my respond the last time means verry beautifull.....its arabian....
    just wanted to let you know......
    and good luck and blessings with youre relationschip......everything will be fine....if the both of you just believe..
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you i appreciate it and that's a nice compliment thank you ha ha ha well deeply felt i appreciate it thanx
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm wondering if you still feel this way or is this a poem
    from back day.


    If this is a current situation, I don't know what to say.


    I've felt like this, and I've unfortunately caused
    others to feel like this.

    Just don't regret the love, never regret the love.

    No matter how one-sided, unrequited or undecided
    never regret the love.
     
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    Keep ur head up my sister!! We all search for that REAL love that will stand the test of time.... I loved this poem gurl.... I was feeling it!!!!