Black Poetry : AND ID BE

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  1. freequeensee

    freequeensee Member MEMBER

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    AND ID BE

    A vision in your dreams
    a spiritual being
    foreva blossoming
    mystically encompassing
    exponential levels of complexity
    a woman of GOD made magnificently
    so incredibly
    n phenomenally
    I'd be the square root of a divine creation
    a mother ID be symbolized in every nation
    from ancient to modern civilizations
    the solution to life’s algebraic equation
    a demonstration of hard work n dedication
    n thru dem trails and tribulations
    ID BE a resounding vessel of jubilation

    AND ID BE AND ID BE AND ID BE

    Miraculously delivering from my womb the gift of Life
    that I nourish with my very own body
    I am a fertile ground in which to sow seed
    Rooting Deeply
    Astonishingly a Queen of She
    who'd be evolutionary
    with branches as strong as a grand oak tree
    sometimes His brilliance scares me
    cuz ID BE simultaneously
    stronger than a Hercules
    a fragrant rose garden of pure femininity
    n lyrically as smooth as a Makavelli
    equipped with the ability
    to create from nothing a magnificent tapestry
    crafted so beautifully
    n when you look within me you will seeeee
    that ID BE
    the heart and soul of your family

    So-o hush my babies n don't you cry
    ID BE the mother that sings dem der lullabies
    n know my love for you will never die
    even when I'm gone and in the ground I lie
    Id be loving you my babies from the sky
    Id be the familiar stranger that passes by
    you know the one you said had your grandma's eyes
    Id be the gentle breeze that makes you wonder and question why
    n the breath you exhale from a deep long sigh
    all these things ID BE for you at no price
    Yes ID BE with you for all your life

    AND ID BE AND ID BE AND ID BE

    Dedicated to My Grand Ma 12- 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a beautiful tribute to the one u love so
    tyte awesome flow ....wow !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a beautiful dedication. This was simply lovely poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin a masterpiece
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes .....
    this is beautifull.. :love:

    In the circle of life roots beauty passing on..


    beautifull...

    :hi: welcome Freequeensee..








    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've got a gorgeous piece of work here poet...
    and I'm loving the rhythm and word use in it!

    Keep it flowing...
    Sage