Black Poetry : and he feared when she told him this.

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (the pitfalls and perils of what most call love)


    she was so
    strong and
    tough and independent
    and
    i guess love's erosion had worn her
    as she told he

    'i can't see life without you'

    he thought and he felt
    and he
    shivered
    as he
    thought and he felt
    yet most of all he
    fe
    ar
    ed

    f e a r e d

    feared
    when she told him this.

    he feared for her.



    sean.again.
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    o definitely a brain freezer

    :lol:

    welcome home poet

    :)

    pd
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet poet poet

    you done it again

    on some deepness

    feeling the depth poet

    this is strong

    DSS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a shocker indeed
    the fear of the love she pose
    when it's in his hand ....
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tank y'all, tank y'all

    for the reads and replies....

    really and truly glad that you all felt this one.


    sean.again
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have felt this way poet and no one could describe it better than you...

    welll done my friend...well done
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mhmm!!! i can see this in my own love history. thank you for sharing this here!!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang
    This is just to deep !
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true so true –
    too much too soon is too much.
    and bra I feel that "what most call"
    couldn't agree more
     
  10. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    perfect love drives out fear...I fear a lot I suppose....well written and a real mind teazer.
    I enjoyed the read

    lo'
     
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