Black Poetry : And Away We Go ~

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Hey man...
    Here come the thought police )

    Telephone tapped in a poet's crib
    Often recording the way we live
    Brothers this ill can't spit the juice ~
    Osama bin Laden worked out a truce

    I support the troops
    And hula-hoop
    Around the truth
    Of voting booths...

    And damned if I ain't scrutinized
    Watched BIG TIME by prying eyes

    It's the same old song of sing-a-long
    Watch the bouncing balls
    Ours sure are LARGE

    I come from Mars
    To seed new stars
    Puppets on the moon
    Don't move no crowd :laugh:

    In 1984 reality...
    Ugly is the state of liberty

    Your wartime crew
    Just sweating me...

    Confused?
    I ain't no Eninem

    I fought way back in the Spanish War
    And away we go
    Racism soared...

    In The Civil War I died for you
    And away we go
    White anger grew

    Fought the Viet Cong right by your side
    And away we go
    More genocide!

    Now Muslims gotta die?
    Have you lost your mind?

    And away YOU go
    The prophet CRIED!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :jump:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!
    speaketh brutha let it all out
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Solid, RICH!
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always 1poet I love your writing, it always has a seriousness to it but yet it is not a chokining in your face type seriousness it's music that makes you want to keep listening and think about it when it's over. Love this piece.
     
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    snaps in the cafe'. deep brothas are in short supply spread the word.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this is deep!!!nice way of directin that mental of urz....observe the observers........nice....... :wink:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A prophet cried... Thanks.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In support of those who are forced to fight, but have no real voice in this war, or any that have gone on before. Keep putting the truth out there in that way that you have poet.
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Watz, your support is always appreciated, thanks.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother,
    Your pen compelles me to stop and peep in whenever I see your name, this was ...like always, a tight piece, my respect is always with you.
     
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