Black Poetry : Ancient Tribe from Africa

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here sit a tribe
    inside a village
    they was the one's
    who came before
    opening the doors
    to slavery & more
    deep in thy history
    of what was instored
    escape the persecution
    slavery
    being set free
    making the long voyage
    from the stolen landz
    across the tango sandz
    a vast untamed sea
    upon a land called da free
    set sail on some strange
    twist a foreign shore to
    plant an seed inside a
    land of American
    to watch it grow a future
    generations descendant
    from the ancient tribe
    living deep inside this heavy
    depressional oppressed land
    exploited wildness struggle
    awakening nightly from the
    hollow mysterious universe
    howls of whispers in tears
    cries of souls for millions of
    fear years
    who are you, what of thy life
    some tribe inside the mockery
    of light past the drifting glar
    knowledge lost from the moon
    and sun from the freedom of man

    Old and wise satyr grand creator
    give us our wisdom of thy hour
    give us the time from the
    mother showers to bloom again
    from these monsters of sin
    the pal face massa from england
    lost in violence , rape and beaten
    cross mate date reckless desires
    a country jealousy of debris and past
    life long struggle one day will pass
    remember the frizzy muddy tramp
    from the ancient fire once an our
    great landmark shine the light
    to end this feast of struggling peps!

    so many nights without sleep
    so many scares womb so deep
    falling tears filled the city streets
    coz da ancient tribe still they weep
    for the freedom of thy land
    of many years held by da white man
    worriors battle
    sought in war
    now my people , tyme we even the
    SCORE
    stand in the mighty fire of grace
    take back the black human race
    walk the path set forth the land
    so they know we AFRICANZ
    from the radiant sun , moon & more
    wisdom , knowledge we stor
    from thy bondage of unity
    a united freedom to sail da shore
    head home sweet mother land
    upon your body of sand
    let us fight the unjustice rep
    the lawz and rewrite da calls
    teach and tame they child
    so we return to the ANCIENT TRIBE
    hear thy whispers , hear thy cry
    we are black knightz worriors of hope
    the inner power ready to spread
    together or singlely we be left for dead
    hear me Ancient Father
    hear my cry , i can't lay down to die :new:

    my people time ticking running fast :time:
    how many more years will
    we let pass before we join
    handz to make this fist to
    rise up from this ditch of deep
    struggle and oppression kiss
    and strike da blow we aim & know
    tell me people of the land
    are you ready to make this stand ?

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    2004 $R Nu waves
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: I'M READY! great and inspiring write RICH, this is :welldone: i heard you speaking it in the beginning, but as i continued to read i could hear you yell and proclaim what was lost, and what we must find in ourselves to return............to return..................to.........return........HOME.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yessssssssssssss!!
    lilcherry76 u hear my cry
    headed home
    headed home
    no place like home
    we've roam long enough now
    let's go home to the sweet MOTHER LAND
    thank u sista so much for listening to the far cry.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear you feel the soul crying out...very well posed scribe
    speaking out in volumes and with the depth that needs to be heard
    very powerful piece....enjoyed the read to the fullest....Angel
     
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    thank u sistah queen as we move and walk in streams
    to reach the core and end the pain headed back to thy LAND
    feel the moment as it tingles let us as people stand for our CROWN
    and take back the peace to the motherland sweet africa
     
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    Cultural and empowering poem...
    Your voice screamed revolution
    beneath each stanza...

    Kudos for this one...
    Much luv,
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sage it's our time to rise
    and ova take the unjustice
    that has been our killer for years
    and return to the place the groundz of Africa
    thankz for the honoring of the Ancient tribe..
     
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    I think that tribe watches us still somehow, as you do in this scribe, and oh the thoughts that must cross their minds, smh. Deeply posed, tell the truth and shame the devil.
     
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    the eyez see and death ear hear
    time we walk out the shadow of
    taught destruction upon the people
    time we fine our zone to go home
    from this white man land Thankz sis.
     
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