Black Poetry : ancient song: what I want

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haiku


    each moan, burnished light
    drenches my tight closed eye-lids.
    this, was orgasm



    your way of loving
    reeks of freshness and orange
    blossoms that are song.



    understand you move
    in me like numb tears that work
    hard to elicit


    you were laughter in
    veins ripe for your seedlings; now
    you offer strange fires


    my altar, profane
    and you merge pagan with Christ-
    how vulgar you are.


    *************************


    give me exposed moment of we…engage in the
    passionate embraces of tantric existentialisms…
    we document our bones, we make note of our separate
    sounds…learning how to grow and create new moments
    within the confines of our syllables.
    we choose to speak in hurricane rhythms and heartbeats that
    interpret our names in sound…sound…
    we are…
    given to our baseness…loving the way your thighs will
    conceal the vestiges of civilization;
    the way I can remember we engaged like weather gods
    your thunder speaking to my lightning.
    We are remembered witnesses to what we have done…
    we have moved thru twilights and midnights
    singed with the stench of rain…we leave impressions
    of red earth and fertile crescents; emblazoning our names
    across smiles and minds that run rife with smiles.





    ©2008
    ~AgAbus




     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you want has been etched in stone from the beginning of time. Your descriptive use of words...make your verses almost touchable. Well done.
     
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    flo on poet!
     
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    Sister Watz and Sister Nevar...you are both wonderful and I thank you for diggin me.
     
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    AgAbus:
    One word....
    HOTT!!!!

    Much Luv
     
  6. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis 4ever...thank you so much.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do the darn thing poet just do it ...wow !!!
    let me say i want it too
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh Rich...

    thank you so much for your support...whewwwwwwwwwwwwwww.:flame::flame:
     
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