Black Poetry : Anatomy of an Orgasm

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anatomy of an Orgasm


    Sensuous words flow gently
    Over ears and around body
    Murmuring whispering
    Causing squirms and trembles
    The shapes of lips forming
    Phrases on flesh
    Nerves sizzling at the contact
    Bodies straining yearning
    Wanting release
    Torture, no reprieve.
    Breath passing over skin
    Tantilizing, breathing coming
    Quicker, shallow breaths.
    Fingertips travel hills and valleys
    Dipping into rivers and
    Caressing the soft hollows
    Of throat, back, ear.
    Mouth following fingers paths
    Tongue licking, stroking,
    Tasting. Lips skimming flesh
    Lightly, barely touching.
    Over belly, breasts,
    Thighs, knees, calves,
    Feet. Toes sucked, licked,
    Teased, curling.
    Hips twitching,
    Thighs trembling, eyes rolling
    Backward, unseeing
    Mouth moving, words mumbled
    Undecipherable, tangled
    Gasps, moans,
    Whimpers, soft cries.
    Teeth bite down on pink lips,
    Jaw clenches tight.
    Fingers curled into sheets,
    Twisting, yanking, pulling.
    Back arches up away from the bed
    Body releasing.
    Muscles relaxing, fingers unclenching
    Legs falling open, thighs amid
    Tangled sheets.
    Pale flesh on dark satin,
    Hair damp and wild,
    Spreading over pillows.
    Eyes closed, breathing deep.
    Sweat glistening, musky aroma
    Filling the darkness.
    Lips once again pressing
    Against skin, kissing away
    The dampness. Sighs,
    Moans, mumbled I love yous.
    Bodies spooning, curling
    Together, relaxing.
    Final kisses, touches,
    Words. Sleep falls down
    Blankets the lovers.

    Caramelpython
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wherever you was going with this, I went there too. this was off the hook and spicy to the bone I like the way you laided this out. thanks for sharing this piece and inviting us in,
     
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    there you go i see your flow is on full power almost anyway...:lol:
    see i know what you can do now bring it to us!!!!!

    anyway this was a very well trip you took me on
    think i go again...nice drop tight hot and spicy...
    flow head on ma snake...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    OOOOOO....

    python....you bad:devil:

    u totally took me there with you on that ride....that was soo good :)
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In One Word, This Is...

    :jumping:Extraordinary! :jumping:


    WoooWeee! What A Fine Piece Of Beautiful Work! :roll:





     
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    wow... It's gettin' hot in 'hurr :hot: !!!
    I'm really feeling this... VERY nice

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :devil:
     
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    They came, they saw, and I suppose they conquered...lol. You have quite a way with descriptive words...wow. Spicy and very well posed.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    Thanks QueenT and just think I finally did it in a aclean manner...LOL No hammer? QQ'n..........WOW!

     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's Just A Python Thang...LOL

    :smokin: ........ Im trying to bring the creative "juices" to ya'll (LOL) :wink:
    "I just Do What I Can Do When I Can Do It"


     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You...

    :devil: LOL, see what I do? :look: LOL
    Thank you sister hope u enjoyed my little trip, this ride was free of charge this time. :spinn:



     
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