Black Poetry : Analysis

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Feb 13, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Analytical process
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    When I hear your voice
    I hear the sound
    That is familiar to me
    The sound
    Of caution
    And
    Taking things slow
    Vowing never to feel the pain
    That once
    Reigned
    In your members
    Yet it is the sound
    Of a queen
    Waiting
    For that one king
    Who exemplifies the
    Qualities
    Of the True King
    Seeking
    So that you may be found
    But what shall you do when
    You have been located
    So long out of the game
    Are they real
    Or just
    Vultures waiting
    To devour
    When the wall comes down
    So retreating in the poetic flow
    You find a world
    That you can roam free
    But not as free as you like
    For yet and still
    To be free
    You must face things
    That you’ve locked away
    Romance
    Passion
    Love
    Unlock the door
    Let them go
    And find rest for your poetic soul.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****......Bishop, were you readin' my mind & soul today or what??! :confused: This is me through & through.... I can relate!!

    :heart: it!!

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ya in a str8 grooveee! do yo thang and bring it on!
     
  4. Rashad

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    See! There u go!

    Dropping it like it's hot! Tyte scribe poet!
     
  5. dnommo

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    Bishop...Bishop...Bishop..you have stepped into this one today...

    mad-excellent scribe...

    one.
     
  6. Bishop

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    Thanks for the read yall....
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop,

    I'm feeling this. Nice piece. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Deep sentiments expressed here. Nice.

    BE
     
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