Black Poetry : An Urge You’ve Created( I like this one!)

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cannot overlook the sexy smile you project,
    Nor the impulse within me it creates
    As I watch you move and interact with people around you,
    I watch you define elegance, and grace.

    The caramel colored flesh you are exposing to my eyes,
    indeed seems comparably sweet to taste
    I can almost visualize the moments of bliss we can produce,
    if you let me in your space.

    I’ll show no reluctance in touching you everywhere,
    because all of you looks so nice.
    And I am not sure of your conditions for that kind of access
    But, I'm certain it’s worth the price.

    There is an urge brewing within me, an urge you’ve created
    Hence, I’d enjoy your presence when it ignites
    I am finding I have little control over my inclination
    to know and experience your delights

    I see ultimate levels of gratification in our future,
    if we make the decision to interact.
    I will take much pleasure in doing things you enjoy
    For such things I have a knack

    I will use all the experience and knowledge I have
    Along with all the strength in my back
    I will fondle the places you liked to be touched
    So I can explore all the ways you react

    I cannot overlook the sexy smile you project,
    Knowing any man who sees it relates
    I watch you move and interact with people around you,
    It is making me prepare to give chase

    The caramel colored flesh you are exposing to my eyes
    appears ready for my touch and embrace
    I can almost visualize the moments of bliss we can produce
    And the ample satisfaction that awaits

    I’ll show no reluctance in touching you everywhere,
    Each touch will pleasurably precise
    I’m not certain of you conditions for this access
    But, I am certain I am enticed

    There is an urge brewing in me, one you’ve created
    Thus this is my formal invite
    For I am finding little control over my inclination
    To stimulate something special tonight

    I see ultimate levels of gratification in our future
    it is my endeavor to make them fact
    I will take much pleasure in doing things you enjoy
    Find your “spots” wherever they are at

    I will use all the experience and knowledge I have
    And you will experience the full impact…​


    Then to, at some point you got to give to someone
    And I sincerely want to be that cat​
     
  2. Khasm13

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    dude...
    i've felt the same way about
    certain individuals...this piece was on point
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :eeek: :eeek: :bowdown: :bowdown: WoW!!!! I am so in LOVE with this piece! I mean really, it's just totally off the hook!!!!! Much LOVE to you!
     
  4. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for feeling me... many of us have been here before
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
    laid well all the way down
    feelin ya on dis...
     
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