Black Poetry : An Untitled Piece 4 Bishop

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  1. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I said that name: Bishop, I started to wonder and ponder on
    “What does it really mean?” Then suddenly in A Dream, the
    answer came and I never looked at Bishop the same

    Dream enLIGHTened me that Bishop is Spiritual
    With a beaming Spirit that sets him apart (from others)*
    Drawing all to take unrestrained pleasure
    In the “LightHouse” of his heart

    Dream enlightened me that through scribes
    Bishop could send out vibes that could touch
    And very much, sensate the mental and physical state
    Of any who comes into contact with these scribes

    ******That’s right, Sensational Vibes.********

    Dream enlightened me that Spiritual Bishop
    Has a certain direct cognition of the love game
    Said there’s a "Sermon Of Love" created
    Respectably in his own name

    Dream enlightened me that Bishop’s Light
    Is like the comfort of a “Morning Bath”
    After a long Love-Making Night

    Said His Light is a soul soother
    Smoother than “Satin Sheets”
    His Rays are “Soul Kisses”
    Without an equal; quite unique

    And speaking of Kisses, Dream
    Said the "Bishop’s Kiss"
    Is not an act of “Temporary Affection”
    It’s one of those interactions
    That guarantees a reaction
    Of long lasting pure satisfaction

    So when I awakened
    Dream left me “Bishop’s Resume”
    Letting me know that I’d find “X-treme Pleasures”
    If I employed him when he came my way

    So here is my quest:
    “Bishop, If you’re looking for hire
    I sure could use some of that LIGHT
    To keep me inspired
    To keep me in a comfort zone
    To keep me from being alone
    To keep some shine in my life
    To keep me somewhat free of strife
    To keep me pleasured
    Give me so much of that LIGHT til it can’t even be measured"

    ….man, Dream did the dam thang
    When to me she explained
    What is meant by Bishop’s name
    And this is why I’ll never look at Bishop’s name the same
     
  2. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Awwww, this was beautiful and touching Kim! Bishop gets madd love from us sistas all the time, ya know!
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was surprisingly vibin off of that same Essence, KIMDRICKA, what a blessing you are to him for your appreciation, and what a blessing he bestows upon all of us!

    1luv
     
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    That was pretty good Kimdricka!! I like how you used some of the titles of his poems to go along with yours. Very creative!

    D.
     
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    go head Kim!!! liked da way u composed this...and da way u put it i don't think "I’ll never look at Bishop’s name the same"!!
     
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    Kimdricka...girl...I don't know what to say except thank you for this wonderful piece..I think I'm gonna :cry:
     
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    oh, how i love this piece...very nice! keep on scribin', i'm watchin'.


    ~~~letitjusflo~~~
     
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    Dis was very sweet kimdricka. Keep da flows comin girl:)

    AM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyght and u did it right
    da visional cast was beautiful
    da Bishop comfort to mental thoughts ........flow on sis.
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i had to hook him up cause he has really kept me inspired and lifted since i've been over here in Korea. thank yall for all the love, and Bishop thank you for all my smiles :wink:
     
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