Black Poetry : An Unfrozen Heart

[Harry Hyman]

An Unfrozen Heart

Inflexible, intractable, even adamantine
is an ice chiseled heart's refrigerated sunshine,
chilling its warmth to freeze its rays
to block Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

If gloom within such heart does loom
as an unlived mansion with unlit rooms,
then one ray of Love's illumined heat
will unleash hot breaths of Life's light beat,
deicing, defrosting floors and doors
of this mansion's wind frozen corridors.

Then gloom can't rest in Life's light heart.
There's no room left from end to start.
For the heart yearns now for light displays
of Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

Namyh​

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[$$RICH$$]

this was like a melt down very well done poet

 

[watzinaname]

I could almost feel the thaw, heart warming piece poet.

 

[cherryblossom]

An Unfrozen Heart

Inflexible, intractable, even adamantine
is an ice chiseled heart's refrigerated sunshine,
chilling its warmth to freeze its rays
to block Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

If gloom within such heart does loom
as an unlived mansion with unlit rooms,
then one ray of Love's illumined heat
will unleash hot breaths of Life's light beat,
deicing, defrosting floors and doors
of this mansion's wind frozen corridors.

Then gloom can't rest in Life's light heart.
There's no room left from end to start.
For the heart yearns now for light displays
of Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

Namyh​

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Absolutely exquisite!

The imagery you gave me was....cascades of water from the melted ice flowing down stairs, making waterfalls over banisters, rushing and bursting through once locked doors and purifying every heart in its path.


And you get extra kudos for using "adamantine!'

 

[Lataisha Nicole]

I loved this poem, and I swear It describes just how a broken heart feels.Been there baby and I ain't going back.However it comes, I'll accept it gracefully,saving each ounce of pain as a memory, just so my heart will never forget, that life yields no regrets!
Bless up poet!