Black Poetry : An Unfrozen Heart

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  1. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An Unfrozen Heart

    Inflexible, intractable even adamantine
    is an ice chiseled heart's refrigerated sunshine,
    chilling its warmth to freeze its rays
    to block Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

    And if gloom within such heart does loom
    as an unlived mansion with unlit rooms,
    then one ray of Love's illumined heat
    will unleash the warmth of Life's light beat,
    deicing, defrosting floors and doors
    of this mansion's hearth frozen corridors

    Now gloom can't rest in Life's light heart
    there's no room left from end to start
    the heart yearns now for Light displays
    of Love's penetrating singeing blaze.
    HH
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very masterfully done in a sweet melt down
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    i likes
    peace
    angel
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AN UNFROZEN HEART...wow...
    melt down, warm down, hearts on fire...what can I say...we do know this...whatever the case..the heart still spells :love:
    an unfrozen heart...put a warm chill in mines...
    this is a wonderful piece...thanks for sharing.

    luv...queentswana
     
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    An unfrozen heart....loved the concept and the way you flowed with it.
     
  6. Earthly Allure

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    Deliciously ice cold. I'm diggin this.
     
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