Black Poetry : An Unexplainable Connection

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Jul 16, 2008.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit down to apply expressions to these feelings
    And none of my extensive vocabulary is appealing
    For it seems as if not an iota of it does any justice
    And all efforts made have emerged a total injustice
    My poetical pen has never before lost its function
    Always rising to the occasion for every junction
    But this time all attempts end in disorientation
    Puzzled at the cause of this lyrical malfunction
    I am confused as how to explain our connection
    These brand new feelings of total comprehension
    As if we have the same kind of mental manipulation
    An intellectual link coupled with physical satisfaction
    An interaction that causes a thirst for continual discourse
    An exchange that elicits vast pleasure devoid of remorse
    I have no substantial terms for this amazing connection
    But comprehension isn’t essential for sincere appreciation​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know how feels, when you feel something so strongly, that words just don't do it justice. When a poetess such as yourself feels this way, those feelings must be powerful. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and expression, made me smile.
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    YO THIS RIGHT HERE

    IS LIKE WHOOOOAAAAAA......

    DON'T STOP!

    :bowdown:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel you poet

    you're full of spirit

    and that spirit has to be released somehow, somewhere

    and it seems like me you put it to the paper

    as well
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did you Intentionally Format your Poem in that Shape?

    Very Creative my Sister, that rush of "WHAT?"
    Who where when and Why Loke crazy to the Mind!!!! LOL
    I think I have the Flow today.....smh
    I was feeling this. It was creative sultry, romantic, and pleasant. Flow on sister:)
    Oh I was asking Because it kinda Looks like a Tube Toppped Figure....It's kinda Nice! LOL!!
     
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