Quiet Poetry Lounge : An Understanding

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, May 9, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take a bite from the bread of knowledge
    Bland? Add butter and wash down w/ the Kool-Aide of wisdom
    Being shreaded by cunning canines
    Passing through the esophogus and tickling
    the back of a truthful tongue
    Umm...good?

    Now take a seat on Understanding
    Hard? Grab a blanket and fluff the pillows
    of Comprehension
    Getting comfortable by the hearth
    Watching tangled webs unwind
    Umm... get it?

    When you do...you will be able to teach
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    food for the mind beautiful NDeep keep flowin peace and blessins
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    NDeep

    Nice...very nice.

    Knowledge...get deep
    Wisdom...get steep

    Patience...get wide
    Humble...no pride


    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    hmmmm? Putting the two together. Now I,m full and I'm comfortable. Thanks NDeep The door to my mind has opened.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    snack on the hope
    of greater life as u
    feel the thrist and clutch
    it with pride to the mental
    sip so tender lovin care
    and chew on comfort to
    the soul as it all mix into
    a food for ur soul

    thank u for dis one
     
  6. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm....good
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this flow was the food for the soul
    and the drink for our thirst
     
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