Black Poetry : An Old Friend -

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Apr 7, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You thought that I
    would stay here alone
    and wait for you ~ hell, at one
    point in my life I thought the same
    thing too...
    but waiting to me seemed like
    an investment without the returns,
    -or- playing a game of losing time; wait and see~
    it was trivial and I grew restless -- tired...
    waiting got old while I was still young...
    waiting was no longer the best friend that
    I knew and could confide in
    I couldn't see myself on a continuum circling
    and surrounding the atmosphere of an invisible you-
    for no apparent reason,
    no meaning and not a thing to hold onto
    Until that day you decided
    to come back around and give me a try
    thought you could... fill in my emptiness
    that my old friend "WAITING" had to subside...
    since I was now no longer visible for you
    to see - in my place I left an old
    friend -"WAITING"-
    to keep you company~
    Now you can think about the 'all of me'
    that you could have had at one time
    since I'm gone, introduce yourself...
    I'm sure "Waiting" won't be bothered,
    talk quietly while W.A.I.T.I.N.G as it keeps
    me
    on
    your
    mind ~
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am lovin' the flow of this piece, fo sho...it's tyght. i see a message in this piece, quite nyce, it is. keep on scribin'.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIST~

    Thank you for lending me your mental
    to read this piece.
    :wink:Glad you enjoyed it!!
     
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    See What I'm Sayin'???

    Ya flowz are on like that N2!!!!

    Folks be feeding off ya "thorough" mental!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. alyce

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    yes,

    I'm feeding...taking in copious amounts of the soul dishes you be serving! I do love the way you work the language sis! MUCH respect for the word pictures you bring.

    Thanks

    A
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    And ya' know I'd like
    ta feed ya' sum .....***:angel1:
    Make ya' way to da'
    Twin Cities - so you can eat!!
    you :devil:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce~

    Thanks for the props!
    Yes, I love to have a
    strong command for the
    english language -
    my tongue be thirstin'
    for the knowledge & meaning
    behind words...! I feel ya' sis...
    glad you're lending me your mental
    in order to taste these scrumptious
    dishes too!!

    Be peaceful!!
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!

    Now who's bein' the :devil:??!!?? :laugh:

    Ta that I say let's eat!!!! :laugh:

    Peace
    GQ
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    :tongue: :tongue: :tongue:

    Well, have at it!!
    :roll:
     
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    Yummy...what time is {dinner}???!!!???

    :tongue:
    GQ
     
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