Black Poetry : An ode to the Magnum Man

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Be eazy greezy, i won't treat you sleezy,
    put you on your knees
    let you give me, what I know you been needin,
    matter fact, more like what you been feenin
    have your eyes gaze me up, while you go down,
    but "just hush", read the pulsing pearl
    as if it was braile,
    only your tounge is your fingertip,
    now rock my world
    oh but don't go fast yet,
    start it real slow,
    then put your foot on the pedal,
    drive faster than the speed limit shown,
    I be the realest misses, sweet but tuff,
    but don't mistake my sweetness for weakness becuz'
    I like it ruff,
    for most who don't really know me
    wud say I was the illest flirt,
    they swear they can have me
    doing a "tweet" dropping my skirt,
    I'm a very honest person I know the"Truth Hurts"
    but I need a "Magnum Man" that gets the job done,
    need a man with the arms that'll make a girl trip,
    and when he hits it while were kissing
    have me doing back flips
    So if you think you can satisfy,
    give me a call to apply,
    But if you can't fill the positions,
    you need not try!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word word !!
    i hear ya here say it loud
     
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    thank you rich.. i guess nobody else has met the magnum man.. lol.. are you and he one the same.. lmao! :?:
     
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    re: ode

    Nice poem.
     
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    All I can say is Im scared. Whewww Steam from this piece got my glasses fogged up. Im peeping to see if its safe to look now lol.

    Thanks for sharing...
     
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    Something about this that reminds me of that old song "Sledgehammer". Anywho, this was indeed a spicy drop.
     
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