Black Poetry : AN ODE TO THE BLU-BLACK MAN

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  1. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blu-Black skin shines divinely
    Under the glow of my gaze
    Eyes travelling .. mouth-wateringly
    Up to your Blu-Black face

    So seeking bliss
    I desire to kiss
    The half-moon eclipse
    Of your Blu-Black lips

    The exploration
    Of you, Blu-Black creation
    - Is sexual elation
    For the Sistas of your nation
    Sensations, Brotha. Temptation

    And tell me why
    You have to catch my eye,
    Blu-Black thigh?
    Unbridling desire
    Fuel for my fire

    (Sistas, do you feel my flow?
    Why’s he gotta do that though??
    He knows what he does, indeed
    He knows where Blu-Black thighs lead …)

    … to nature’s rise
    (Don't act suprised
    It's something to be idolised!)
    That Blu-Black prize
    Of Blu-Black strength
    The reason for your
    Blu-Black length



    (And so I salute thee, Blu-Black
    An ode to your ebony skin
    Now stand and speak and show to all
    Your beautiful Blu-Black within) From a Sista-with-Love.
     
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    Son of RA STAFF STAFF

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    :terrific: Wonderful piece!!! :bowdown::great:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    ...how i revel in the blu-blackness of my ebony-hued sweetness. yessss...completeness is the portion i bring, in the song i sing. I AM YOUR KING. bow down to my grace. take your place...on our ancestral throne. let it be known that WE are the POWER that GLORY epitomizes. a FACT...of the exactness of my BLU-BLACKness.

    your river flows, poetess
     
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    Such applause to such a pleasing sight, doesn't get spoken highly of enough. Great write poetess, truly enjoyed this.
     
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    Hi Spirit

    :wave:
    Singing the praises of the blu-black man... I know that's right!

    Let the forum say, AMEN!


    Nice flow!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    I bow in da grace of this here.....awesome ode...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i salute you sista brethern

    i appreciate the appreciation

    and i LOVE my sistaz the way you LOVE brothaz

    peace
     
  8. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your comments beautiful people .... indeed we have some unique beauty!
     
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