Black Poetry : An Ocean View

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sand sifts through my fingers
    Falling to the beach where I stand watching
    The boat a half mile from shore
    A figure on deck stretches toward the sky
    It is a woman
    The nipples of her breasts a silhouette
    The roundness of her *** matches the roundness of the sun
    Is she as hot?
    Is she waiting for a lover to join her in nakedness?
    Who will emerge from the cabin below?
    Please let it be no one
    She stands erect
    Just like me
    She must see me
    Perhaps she knows I swim only in pools
    Else I would join her
    Feeling her heat
    Make love to her under the sun
    But the boat moves further from shore
    Her beautiful body now just an image
    I loved those seconds watching her
    Time in love can be short or long
    It was beautiful
    I smiled
    My left hand moved
    A twitch
    It was a slight wave goodbye
    I know she waved back
    As I turned to join the boardwalk crowd

    BE
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    yes, you were there.....

    this is TOO rough!! :wink:


    T
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY BE................

    SHE SAW U AS I DID
    AND THE SOFT WAVE
    WAS HELLO
    MAN! I WAS TO YO LEFT I WAS THERE
    THANK U FOR ALLOWING ME ON THE
    BOARDWALK WIT YA
    TYGHT FLOW .....................................:toast:
     
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    {she waved 'hello'}

    she saw only one
    among the meandering
    backdrop
    of people passing
    along the
    boardwalk

    only one man
    standing in the sand
    close to the shore

    even from this
    distance
    she knew he
    was tall in
    stature

    he stood straight
    his shoulders
    broad

    long arms
    & legs
    probably tanned
    in this heat

    she faced
    him, imagining
    the features
    of his face

    the brightness of their
    sun obscured such
    details

    but she could feel
    his intense
    gaze upon her
    and so she stood
    upon the deck

    baring more than
    her body

    in those moments

    with the mysterious,
    lone man standing
    in the sand

    {...not 'good-bye'}

    BE, you inspire me. :)


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    uppin dis one again ......another classic
     
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