Black Poetry : an island riff...

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    FAST EDDIE - An Island Riff

    I brought this back, because I finally found my original of this...the other was a "lhow did i say that? version
    FAST EDDIE-An Island Riff

    Where you from, when you come in, when you going?
    I say where you from when you come in and when you going?
    I got 7 days lady
    I got to sell me shells, sell me hats, sell me birds - so
    Where you from , when you come and when you going?
    I got to fit me program up right
    I got to fix me program tonite
    Lots of ladies come in today
    I want to help you with your play - so
    Where you from, when you come in and when you going
    Hey, where you from, when ya come in, when ya going
    I got 6 days lady
    I got to sell me wares, sell me beads, sell me shells and
    Give you some - so
    Where you from when you come in and when you going
    What you say? – you come to rest, what you say? – you come for peace
    Rest & peace you’ll get with me.
    I’ll give you piece so you can have your peace
    Now where you from when you come in and when you going
    You hear me, where you from, when you come an when ya going
    You got 5 days lady
    And I got to sell me shells, sell me hats , sell me birds and give you some
    So where ya from, when ya come
    You must be a city chick-city girls awful quick
    Tight and full of lots of tricks
    I am just a county boy, but I’ll give you lots of joy
    Time is speeding by real fast – come & swim we’ll have a laff
    Nice sista like you me wants to taste…so
    Tell me quick we’ll hit the stick
    Tell me fast me running gas
    Where you from, when you come in and when you going
    I say where you from when ya come in and when ya going
    Only 2 days lady and I got to sell me shells, sell me birds, sell me wares
    And give ya some
    So where you from –me wanna give you some
    When you come in – me wanna give ya some
    When ya going – me wanna give you some
    Me wanna give ya some..me wanna give ya some,
    me wannnaaaa give yaaaa
    whar ya frommmmm?


    (c) deepy/ncn l984
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o yes i like dis here so crafted
    flow on
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ah $$rich$$ and olakuoto...me glad you feel the flow...
    makes me jump and smile from head to toe..
    or it makes me jump and think about my youth..
     
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    yes indeed
    there is a groove to your flow
    liking this for sure
    Peace
     
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    oh i likes this...
    flow please
    nice groove
     
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    the island in me couldnt resist readin dis lol :D
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    bluewater, mzblkangel, triniti424...
    me thank you for your energies..
    of heaven earth and sea...
    next time i wish that all of you will join the riff
    so it can go ...endlessly...
     
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    Deepy, welcome. I and I digs that Ire!
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i never thanked ya lpoet....
    altho i looked at the piece because i had finally found my original and wanted to put it down as i wrote it not as i remembered it...
    so the original version...and many thanks to you as well l poet..twas nice to be welcomed...I remember how at home you all make me feel..and how encouraaging some of you were to help in my continuum...
     
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    Well I am loving this, the repetition, the island flava, just a smooth vibe here deepy.
     
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