Quiet Poetry Lounge : An Island Interlude in Their Mind...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They decided to meet on an island
    an island in their mind
    They decided to create an Eden
    only the two of them could find
    She wanted a beach filled with warm pink sand
    and a royal blue painted sky
    He desired a passionately raging purple sea
    and a golden moon placed way up high
    But most of all she wanted to sip the wine
    she tasted from his succulent lips
    And he especially desired to sample her honey
    sweetened skin as he suckled her fingertips
    Soon entwined lovers were covered with pink granules
    and a salty breeze blew across that sky of royal blue
    Purple waves rinsed sand off bare bronzed bodies, while
    the moon created intimate shadows saying I love you
    They decided to meet on an island
    an island in their mind
    They decided to create an Eden
    only the two of them could find....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a beautiful place to meet and interlude in
    i really love how this was painted in perfection
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you felt the beauty in these surroundings Rich. Appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sista let it continue
     
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    I say you got the making love on the beach scene right down to the T'bone.
    I like the colors you used alot, like pink sands. I guess that made me think they was rolling in koolaid sugar! Nevertheless, I enjoyed your piece.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I shall try to let it continue on brotha Rich.
    Your response made me smile ThaEmissary, glad you enjoyed this colorful piece brotha.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow watz...lovely imagery..and thought
    have you ever been to eluthera in the bahamas...the sand is pink...
    pink....
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    You want to save some of this hot stuff for our collab ? :)
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No I have never been deepy, but I did go to Bermuda some years ago, and the beaches had the prettiest pink sand. Thank you sista.
    LOL @ Keita. Thanks brotha, alright.
     
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    The spirit of the heart is gentle your work is a masterpeace continue to teach my sister in spirit.
     
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