Black Poetry : ...an invisible heart...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i gave my whole heart to my first love,
    i got 3/4 of it back
    i gave 3/4 to my second love,
    i got half of it back
    i gave half of that to one i started to love,
    i'm slowly getting it back
    it makes me wonder when real love,
    will give me his whole heart and piece all of mine back...
     
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    Hearts mend, if you give 1/4 a 1/2, even 3/4 ...in time, it becomes whole again. I've lost mines more times than I care to remember
    nice piece poet
     
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    Thats hott i only got like a fifth but hey but thats love
    Its a wonderful feeling-lol
    Nice piece poet I loved it!
     
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    Honestly really really really feel this one. Good poem
     
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    this was a very good poem poet flow on.
     
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    thanks so much everybody :)
     
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    anymore comments?
     
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    thought provoking piece...

    I've learned personally that
    when your give your heart
    you should get it back...twice its size
    I've learned that ...that is the love
    I should pursue
    otherwise...my heart just
    continued to dwindle down
    as I gave and gave and gave
    until...I had nothing left to give
    emotionally bankrupt...:(
    but the one that gives it back
    bigger than what it was before :look:


    just a different perspective
    but this poem was thought provoking
    and moving...

    short...but potent piece of work here

    I love it sis!
    Nice work,
    Sage
     
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    thanks for bringing a different perspective:)
     
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    the Answer yet known
    but true love is bound
    and all u give will come back doubled
    i believe .....it's on the rise sis stay
    in the race .
     
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