Black Poetry : An Intimate Proposal - Mizdee and Bishop Collab

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u said u want to c
    & i ain't got a problem with sharing
    but there must be a fair exchange
    for every
    gasp
    & moan
    that i share with u
    u must in return
    let me witness two...

    I will share
    The essence of me
    With u
    That we two
    May become one
    Thereby
    Every gasp
    Moan
    & even groan
    will be felt
    by we
    symbiotically
    the bond we share
    shall take us where
    we desire to go…..

    i can tell by that somewhat
    lascivious
    tripped -out
    look that u are displaying
    that u weren't really ready-
    u had no idea that
    all of this lush landscape
    was hidden from your view.
    soft, ample peaks,
    and smooth amber valleys...
    do u like what u c
    tell me
    am i what u expected...

    I must admit
    U are more than
    I expected
    Never would I have imagined
    The embodiment of passion
    Herself
    I would have never dreamt
    That I would be in the presence
    Of a woman
    Totally
    Complete
    As I take in the lush landscape
    I can barely gaze into your beauty
    For it blinds
    Me
    Yet I shall
    Endure
    For u are
    The queen
    I have waited for…

    i don't want u to wait much longer
    but i need a little more time
    to show and tell
    u how i feel at this moment...
    my love...
    your gaze -
    my hands -
    are dancing
    a sweet and erotic samba
    inside and
    outside each
    part of me...
    fully feeling me...
    u r inside my mind
    telling me where u would luv next -
    licking and touching
    every spot that i would want u to...
    u must be my king
    because know one else could make me feel this way....

    I am your king
    Your destiny revealed
    Enter into my heartland
    Where I shall introduce you
    To new passions
    Let me love u like never before
    Let me excite u
    Possess u erotically
    Screams of passion
    Transformed into
    Screams of nirvana
    As you reach a level in Xtasy
    That you have never thought possible
    I do this not because I can
    But because you are deserving of this pleasure…..

    Will u accept my hand?


    sweet luv-her
    yes, i want to cum into your heartland
    i can c myself
    in your arms
    experiencing
    pleasure
    that neither of us
    have ever know before
    i want u to walk with me,
    my king, in our own
    erotic land
    but, for now my luv...

    please,
    just give me your hand...
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, well, well! I ain't mad at ya'll!
    Very nice collab. Enjoyed this here :D
     
  3. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Bish...I see you started your birthday celebration already!!! Handle it Extreme One!!
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My!My!My!

    This here is Flamin Hot Yall!!
    Tyte collab!
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the luv ya'll

    dee
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    uhmmmmmm...

    ya'll got it going on

    keep flowin' :)

    pd
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice collab.
    Enjoyed the read.
    Scribe On Poets!

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ sits amazed at the talent we have up in the hizzay!!!

    Mizdee/Bish - this is some out da galaxy vibin' here!!!!

    Applauding your collaborative effort!!!!

    Very well done!!!

    :peace: to the Bish
    :heart: to Mizdee
    GQ
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzD & Bishop.


    ummm hmmm... wellllll nah! :D

    this heah was alla dat & den some!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  10. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't know where the b'day boy is hiding so i'll say THANX to:

    Coco, GQ, Pd, and Elayne -

    i/we really appreciate the luv ya'll!

    dee
     
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