Black Poetry : An inspired piece about Daddy's girls!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Momma said from that moment that you first looked at me, that I was the new love in your life...he looked into your tiny face and said she looks just like me when I was this small...at first mother thought he had lost it all..."She's got my dimples she quiclky said'!

    But the eyes he said "look at the eyes"!
    What a surprise I feel when somebody talks about these eyes. Sometimes I feel like they are not my own, and then I am glad that he left his signature on my face, something that can't be erased.

    Daddy said when I accidently overdosed when I was one, that she just "wants Daddy when the doctor is done"! Like some unspoken bond I remembered his chest and the rhythm of sleeping there so many times.

    When I grew older we finished each others statements not just sometimes , but all of the time. There were no inapporpriate affections, just a love that is pure and unconditional...our relationship sometimes seemed fictional...and I still have my Daddy's eyes! Mother concurs....and she bows her head and cries!

    When I am agitated, anxious , embarassed , excited, my skin is noticeably flushed...when my mother remarked this in the hospital, the white Doctor just blushed, the room was hushed...I said you thought Black people didn't blush?

    Just like something your Daddy would say , as the Doctor leaves the room, she smiles and strokes my now unchemically and naturally curly hair and she whispers, just like when you were first born, so much like your
    father...from the first day you were born, "I told him take "MissMouthAlmighty, she's yourn!"
    RIP DADDY!
    January 14th ,1934-August 18th,1986
    Always near thee and forever yours dearly!
    Bjs(C)2003
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwe, this was so beautiful and SO...true
    there is nothing like a Daddy's girl and the way
    she captures that mans heart...there's nothing like
    it in the world....

    Everyone else is replaced when she arrives and there's
    no super hero that can ever take care of it like "My Dadddy"
    can...as they always say...

    I love this sooooo much, thanks for gracing us with this!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet flow of daddy's girl
    i love it when u flow like dis.....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this....
    nice flow girl
    it was sweet
     
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    Different but I like. Write on Poet...
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww
    so sweet!
     
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    I'M LIKIN' THIS RIGHT HERE..THIS WAS DEF BEAUTIFIL MAMITA......
    I'MGONNA PRINT THIS AND SAVE THIS FOR MY BABYGIRL TO READ WHEN SHE GETS OLDER...MUCH LOVE !!!!;)
     
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    yeahhh gurl...this was lovely...I love when the blak love is alive...helps to dispel the lies of fake blak alibis
    My birth father...wanted nothing to do wit child ( i still love his dumb self though LoL)
    But my daddy...:kiss: I love him and he loves me...
    thanx for this MsluciousB :) :wave:
     
  9. msluciousb

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    Gotta love em!!!!!!!!!

    I'm talking about my ice cream cone buying...Read me when I'm lying!
    Take me everywhere with him kind
    of Daddy.
    Calling me pretty with nicknames like
    Ms.Kitty, Monkey and Princess Caramel!
    I knew to him I as beloved and always
    would be his southern bell.
    Told me he knew how pretty he would
    be if he were a woman , just by looking
    at me.
    Drove all night from his job in the next town just to see me sing "Rain Drops
    Keep Falling on my head" at my sixth
    grade graduation...Now that is what
    you call a Daddyman!
    Always there to hold my hand.
    To chase away boogies in the night.
    And the first one to show me how to ball up my fist if ever I should get in a fight.
    Don't know about some other folks experience, and Daddy was not perfect by far...But to me he was "KING ARTHUR", "Shaka ZULU" and "Martin and Malcolm rolled into one! Yeah , I guess you can say, my Daddy got the job done.... Gotta love em...
    them real Daddies!
    Blessings On Ya House!
    Thanks for reading and taking this trip down memory lane!
    If he is still alive go call him !
    BJS(2003
     
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    this is mad tyte ms b:D
     
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