Black Poetry : An Insomniac's Dream

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  1. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Nights when I'm listenin' hard
    and I'm a temporary insomniac
    i can hear the pitter patter of pain on my window
    most people will call these sounds rain
    but i believe it's the worlds pain
    evaporated and liquified
    most nights i want to escape the lonliness of my bedroom
    and jump right through the window
    maybe then I can fit in with pain
    maybe this rain that you speak of
    will disguise my bloodshot eys and tear-stained cheeks
    most nights i can feel myself go insane
    cuz the tears wont stop falling
    cuz in the morning people will still be a**holes
    and i will never be as beautiful as those girls
    you know who im talking about
    those females with cellulite-less thighs
    perfect proportions, perfect teeth
    and those girls that can make their booty clap
    i will never be as beautiful as those girls
    cuz my thighs jiggle when i walk
    i have a gap, my hair is nappy
    my titties dont sit up, and the flab on my arms jiggle while i type this
    here's my philosophy for anyone whos hurting
    "lifes a b****, so just say f*** it and move on"
    people will hate me either way
    and guys will always try to be playas and
    have three girls at once and tell them the same bulls***
    with those puppy eyes and like a f***in' pro
    make them water on sight
    somebodys not gonna like this poem
    cuz im talking directly to them
    this poem was not written to be treasured
    it wasn't written to be loved and
    it for d*** sure wasnt written to win the Nobel Peace Prize
    it was written to release some stress
    it was written in place of tears
    it was written to say "f*** you" to the one thats hurting me
    but tonight im listenin' so hard
    im up this late, temporarily an insomniac
    shh...if youre quiet you can hear the pitter patter of pain being released
    maybe if i could just jump through my window
    to escape the lonliness of my world
    i could...fly.
     
  2. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...dayum...I feel your pain...your poetry is beautiful...who cares about those other girls..just continue to be you..and true love will find you...
     
  3. PrincessFlowz

    PrincessFlowz Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rico and to everyone who views this...Sawwy about the profanity....It's just the way I was feeling at the time. :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm I felt thig gurl.Just let all that pain out...oh and P.S( the girl that can make thei booty clap at 15 are probably the ones who will be tricks at age 16) Feel me?..:)
    Don't get discouraged.,,,keep that head up and smile:)
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' ya' flowz.
    But you got to know that
    the most beautiful girl in
    the world is nothing without
    some character or personality.
    So don't fall for that superficial hype
    just be you, gurl!
    Much love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe let da feelins flow out !
    dis was a piece of art , it's o'k to vent !
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beauty comes from the inside...feelin your pain on this one.
     
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