Black Poetry : An Impression

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Mar 26, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've left an impression upon me
    An impression in my head
    was left
    by the expression of what you said
    so, expressively
    an impression
    Your words have imprinted footprints of love
    that are running all through my mind
    Words that remind me that you are a majestic
    Nubian king, and I, a regal queen of the same kind
    And the motherland smiles
    an impression
    And although we haven't yet shared one kiss
    you have left a mental silhouette on my sheets
    an impression upon my bed, made when the bliss
    of each hopeful soul meets
    Impressions that remain from the dreams of the nights
    before. When our starry eyes were fixated
    on leaving the windows of our souls ajar
    and all our hidden meanings were translated
    You have left me spellbound
    by a symphony that doesn't utter a sound
    but is well felt by your expression
    So impressed am I
    by this impression
    this impression of you
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Your words have imprinted footprints of love
    that are running all through my mind
    Words that remind me that you are a majestic
    Nubian king, and I, a regal queen of the same kind
    And the motherland smiles
    an impression
    And although we haven't yet shared one kiss
    you have left a mental silhouette on my sheets
    an impression upon my bed, made when the bliss
    of each hopeful soul meets"

    This was beautiful, and it had a nice romantic touch to it. I loved those two stanza's above. Very deep sistah


    You go the flow, keep it goin

    peace out
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Nubian King and a Regal Queen
    A reality in the making...your king has just stepped forword, to claim his regal Queen. This made my heart smile, beautiful piece
     
  4. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece...Keep posting
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz, I am enamored with your impressionist works!
     
  6. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful..liked this peice..you left an impression upon this forum
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you liked those stanzas, and happy you took the time to tell me so Prizefighter16, thank you much.
    So nice to know that this made your heart smile queent, thank you, your words are appreciated.
    Thank you Versatile, I'm enjoying your flows.
    1poet, your responses are creative and witty just like your poems, thank you.
    I'm happy to know this piece impressed you Nisa, thank you.
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You left an impression on me
    Very nicely done
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    impression of hope live
    inside the impression of love
    that feed into the heart of a
    soul which send in impression
    what will be i love the concept
    of this piece and what it's saying
    to a mind & heart flow on sista WATZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know that I did Intrepid, thank you poet.
    An impression of hope lives inside the impression of love, yes indeed Rich. Thank you for the flow in response brotha, so appreciated.
     
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