Black Poetry : An Impasse

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jun 27, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she could be packing

    what i'm lacking

    i wonder if a Big Mac and

    fries

    would be delicious enough to disguise

    my intentions to get her wise

    to my need to surprise

    her with rhymes so nutricious for her soul

    she'll gladly grab hold

    of my arm

    and squeeze it gently enough to let me know there's no harm

    in trusting



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    trusting is a major key one i know u have .....tyte flow
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooooooooooow this was so beautifull nice and sweet ....

    clapping...

    beautifull written poet....
    (that is so nice about poetry the differences in the writting and expressing)






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i,m like looking around you know like why have a lot of people not responded on this ......


    its a beautifull short POEM!


    but beautifull




    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  5. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$


    i think because they know this was meant for you auroraflower :smooch:
     
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    Checkmate

    Beautiful move, Smooth.

    I love the way you chose to soothe her. ;)
     
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    Beautiful move indeed.:)

    The poem is Lovely Howard.
    Mcuch Luv
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just love the way you illustrate so clearly how you feel through something as monotonous and grey as the internet.

    Much soul!

    *fingersnaps*

    ~Ikoro
     
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    flo on howard loving your writes!