Black Poetry : An Affair Poetically

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Warm and embracing you are to me
    those intimate twists of verbs and nouns
    that make my river flood with out bounds

    The way you touch me in those rhymes
    Causing heat, as the nature rise
    that deep way you make me feel
    how you lift me up, and take me there

    A volcanic fire erupts within
    Causing my head to spin
    Body illuminate with desire
    Yes ...yes.... take me higher

    Swirling upward mountain high
    now you got me on a cloud
    In the clouds soaring high
    soaring higher toward the sky

    Breaking loose that intense feeling
    Causing strength and inner healing
    Moonlight whispers come from you
    Stimulate pleasure, in the midnight blue

    Taking me to another height
    Flying higher in the night
    Speaking softly of the stars
    Caressing me with your breathtaking charm
    Making me feel that I am the one
    As the river flow and run

    You are so special yes you are
    From you I feel warmth release and love
    You take me from an ordinary day
    and stimulate me in so many ways

    You are a welcome a refreshing delight
    Together we venture to magnificent height
    so wonderful to have you in my life
    as we wine and dine with words this night
    An Affair Poetically
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace to u Sistah Bluewater!

    ummmm
    i'm luving this flow
    u took me there indeed
    cuz i think i too know bout
    An Affair Poetically :)
    ain't nothing like it
    that's fa sho
    sistah, sistah, SISTAH
    continue to let that river flow...

    peace & blessings
    nadia*binta
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An affair with words can take us any where. You are chocked full of imagination and detail.
     
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    i am so feelin you sis..its nothing like it...
    flow on:angel1:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmm!
    up deep into the night
    da love poetically right
    enterwine dine for two
    a sweet passionate love
    made of u
    twisted blazin ride
    up up unto da glazin sky
    crossing galaxy into a zone
    a place where my love roam
    new heights we venture in
    is the cares deep within
    release and refresh
    feel da depth of one's heart
    mixin after dark
    to a glo a mental pose
    together we bound
    rise like a true rose
    blooming open
    into these arms
    as taste the love the
    greatest charm
    crossing the stars
    so bright da twinkle
    of sweet light
    where our bodies touch
    and the kiss ummm !
    like dancin in air
    from the magic dis u bare
    u are a gift unto earth
    and da love indeed so worthy
    humble gentle and kind
    make one smile and feel
    ya mine
    da soft rapture felt
    is the heart that is delt
    to mesmerize eyez
    hypnotize mindz
    and caress souls
    as dis ride of waves
    unfold to a bliss
    of u and i in da sky ...
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you NADIA*BINTA sister for the love:heart: LOL yeah you know ... love feeling the flows:heart:

    Hey watzinaname thank you for reading my pose..yes it is nice always to enjoy the creative flows

    Hey mzblkangel thank you for feeling me on this sis:heart:

    Ahh yes Brother Rich...i will come back for sure...:laugh:thank you for the dynamite flow ...:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed coz it's in da air now !
    follow da rainbow
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The verb passion a delightful game
    Poet foreplay is exchanged.


    riding on a mighty stallion
    holding firm as we gallop
    up the hill toward the horizon
    holding as we climb higher and higher

    as we venture into the dark
    our heart will never part
    even higher as we climb
    panting sweating
    moving in time

    mentally we become as one
    blooming in each other arms
    to taste the charm of one so blunt
    is indeed a lot of fun.

    as we venture toward the cosmos
    as our body shake and tremble
    stars so bright brings delight
    kissing and hugging oh so right
    like a dance with so much flair
    as we gliding in the air

    it is indeed a magical delight
    as we venture through the night
    you are so gentle you are so kind
    as we rock together in time
    you bring a smile upon my face
    as I nest in your warm embrace

    softly as I come to rest
    mesmerize
    by this great quest
    so lovely riding
    the gentle wave
    of the stars
    and moon this day
     
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    fun lovin
    sweet & mild
    flyin in air
    the flash of smiles
    warm embrace
    together we face
    as we glide the ride
    of night to the place
    where feelin are right
    under the gallop
    into the air
    crossin galaxy
    the orb of ya soul
    is the essence untold
    as i unfold da bliss
    of ya eyez we move
    fast as light tonight
    as compassion flair
    leaving love drops
    everywhere but the
    solo grasp is in the
    air of my extreme
    movement into the heart
    mixin feelins from the
    start
    we unwined
    face to face
    in the arms
    of my charm
    and know
    poetically sprayed
    that foreplay is set
    so into the deep cloud
    we go what we do
    nobody know !!

    must i tell the story
    or keep it hush
    but in mind was da
    sweetest rush of us

    the passion of delightful
    foreplay in the poetic affair
    of u and i way up into the sky
    where i dewell and cast spells
    make u wanna moan and have
    me to roam and wine & dine
    the orbits & cosmos love
    what we do
    and always peepin too
    u and i
     
  10. Bluewater

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    so creative
    so motivating
    the flow of verbs the twist relation
    the wanton passionate emotion blending
    extreme indeed the fire blazing
    I am still flying high
    Seduce by your poetic vibe :wink:
    mmmmmm
     
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