Black Poetry : AMOUR

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sop me up. :love: I'm wet.
    I'm drenched with passion from you my love.
    Saturate me. I'm not waterlogged.
    Feeling lovey-dovey. :spinn:
    The song of you.
    Play me like a hymn.
    Melody piece lyric dream of mine.
    What do you call it. What can I say.
    I'm soaked in your passion what ever what may.
    I can't fight this sex appeal.
    Feeling the sensations your making it real.
    Rhyme nor reason needed here.
    Sop me up.

    My substance dear.

    Can I call you my one and only.
    Care for me.
    Take away my lonely.
    Drown me.
    Soupy, sticky sweet.
    Satisfying pleasing frustate my grief.
    I can no longer remember what made me hurt.
    The normal things that others miss.
    I find here grand within your kiss.
    Have I told you I like this way.
    The love you give it makes my day.

    Ending moonlight
    tells me when I wake.
    I can start again
    your loving grace.
    Sop me up
    like a kid likes cake.
    First thing in the morning.
    The love you make.
    I do my part
    to return the same.
    Sop you up, relieve your pain.
    I'm open.
    Giving all cause
    it makes you heighten.
    :heart:
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh hodee dis had me on the read from the go till the end...just TYTE :)
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE, THIS IS SO HOT. YOU REALLY DID IT WITH THE VISUALIZATION. THIS WAS TIGHT. KEEP IT FLOWIN'.
     
  4. MORE

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    hodeee whre u been? this is greattt.....!:D
     
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    amour smiles at you..
    this was lovely




    Love L
     
  7. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, very nice indeed
     
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    ooooooooooh, Hodee...........I was sopping up this flavor...

    this was "shall I say" HOT

    Definitely!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice piece
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe .......well pose'd and place'd
    flow head on ! HODEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
     
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