Black Poetry : america's tr(end)settaz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Jan 28, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here's a piece for your airwaves.. i mean airlines
    as tr(end)settaz like richard reid's
    " bomb" shoes "air strikees" have taken their "striking" flight
    into unmatching markets...

    on the other wing, Enron had a ron En with core poor rate (corporate) collapse
    managing after the ways of their peer scandalous
    tr(end)settaz as Watergate and Whitewater as Enron's ex employees retirement savings and stocks drift in hot water..
    call this one the "Hotwater" scandal for laidoff peeps
    pleading the loss and not the auditor's fifth as their funds shift
    in America's ocean


    i n(ocean)ize that Thomas Junta feels like Kunta- he got broke off.
    hockey dad's doin a 6 - 10 in the pen for beating a man's head in
    he's dead in that pattern
    now he'll have to worry about big dudes hittin' his "puc" with
    their
    hockey sticks as they lie wait.
    hope he has his "skeet" mask ready he's all spaghetti now..

    speaking of spaghetti Bush's State of the Union address needed Prego
    Bush- tr(end)setta.
    he has mo' drama than Osama speaking of the war on terror which will never end and of the budget which seemingly won't mend for america's in def-i-sit (deficit) in many wayz to God and man
    and so are you for believing his campaign's finance plan.
    i'm recessin' in my flowz...

    don't dose keep your eyes open on theze terrorists who use flight simulation software to rehearse their strategy..
    even the old ladies who reach in their purses for peppermints might catch a beatdown travesty cuz peeps are paranoid and madd suspicious now...

    al queda- eastern tr(end)settaz
    iz Jesse Jackson a tr(end)setta?
    John Walker- confused tr(end)setta
    Al Sharpton- permed out, but maybe not a tr(end)setta.
    Ashcroft- shady tr(end)setta
    iz lil bow wow a tr(end)setta? just playin

    peace be.








     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I peeped...

    ...the lil bow
    wow in there :lol:.
    Yo, this is some
    power-filled
    $hit, right here.
    My brain was
    workin' overtime.
    Fortunately, for me
    I understood it,
    all too, clearly.
    It is amazing what
    you did here with these
    words, pa...
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The FIVE RAISED BLAK FIST AWARD FOR EXCELLENCE GOES TO....

    ...j'hiah!!!!

    bruh this piece is off the charts. you know ya got a brother envious up in here. you have me pondering why in the haeck didn't I think of that. This piece is...

    on point
    classic
    magnificent
    just a straight up dime piece

    bruh, you hurt 'em on this one


    blak
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    that's my baby

    hey :)

    pd
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey...uhhh poet, i mean, gardener...

    did you have some weeds or a muskrat violating your garden? i truly think you killed it...really i do... :alien:

    seriouly this is tight poet...sometimes we gotta put on the black fist in the garden donchaknow?
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd love.

    MapleXtract,
    glad you stopped in for a minute to peep at me.
    don't laugh. so iz he?
    playin' again

    blakverb,
    thanx for the love.
    actually i'd like to see you rip one- title and all dunn

    dnommo :lol:
    i see what's goin' on over the brooks and meadows.
    i'm just tryin' to keep them out of the garden.
    thanx for peepin'

    pd,
    just as sexxy as you wanna be girrirl


    out.......................
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JP.


    ...now you got me puttin' on my versaces
    (umm... by the way... if you notice a pair of yours
    missin'... at least now you know where they be! :D )

    lil brother... you stepped outta the garden &
    brought da noise wit dis joynt. danggg! i almost
    didn't recognize you... i had to read it thrice! :)

    AlwaysNL.
    SunShyne~
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you speak nothing but truth....

    my brotha...

    thank you for this


    a
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    top notch

    flyght strike.......a 1 poet........u worked
    da hell out these wordz u scribe:)
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have 2 pairs

    GA_SunSis,

    your versaces saw clearly, this wuz me. *hiding my 3rd pair*
    i bought you a kfc special girl, your favorite.
    c- ya.

    queen A,
    as always your presence illuminates the whole forum.
    thanx twice.


    $$RICH$$,
    need you to regulate these flights bruh.
    big thanx.


    out................
     
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