Black Poetry : American Idle ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 9, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Narcissistic is a rock band...
    Underachievers from where I stand
    Slack cutting Black American
    400 years in the promised land

    Been played by the white man
    Laid back was your best plan
    Nothing doing,
    You're a broke dam
    Screwed-up no good thang

    If Colored signs
    Were a mind thing...
    Left behind is darn shame
    Everybody go "bling-bling,"
    What the hell is we thinking

    Genocide kill your own kind
    Suicide what's your birth sign
    Getting high on this dope ride ~
    Flip the script in your mind's eye


    Darryl Abdu Omari :uhh:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, i was lucky to catch the poem before I signed off. Great poem 1poet. Very clever...love how the title fits the poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what we see and do is unreal
    this was so on point !!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, PRIZE, Thank you.
     
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    Lawd, there is nothing to say in the face of such truth and poetic perfection.

    Signed,

    your true fan
     
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    Impossible to know where your powerful pen will end up next, but I am staying tuned. Keep making those impressive points poet.
     
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    peace,

    we definitely need to "flip the script in the minds eye"

    Tyte drop poet!

    peace
     
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    Thanks everyone for the feedback.
     
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    1poetsought,

    into the vibe
    the poetic describe
    of aspects of this experience
    brought upon us since
    we fell from grace
    and got lost in this place
    but with stiving and destiny
    we shall again be free

    excellent write....l

    Peace and Blessings
     
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