Black Poetry : American As Apple Pie.....Am I?

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd Sistahly Love
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  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Coco

    can i marry you?
    not now but we when get like 55 or 60

    i liked to grow old literally with you

    cause you talk my language

    plain and simple

    i'm in love but i just don't know it yet


    bowing in your praise and kissing the back of your hand

    Da Street So'ja has met his match
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear the alarm clock chiming...

    thanks for the wake me up, coco. lest we forget, **** AIN'T CHANGED...just a different day.

    it's all good, though.

    aiight.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    coco ya on target

    new day same ****! ya hit it on da nail
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, Thanks for always being so supportive, since day
    one! :kiss:

    Baller, Thanks for your always comforting replies......be it in scrib or simply one word....aiight!;)

    Madd Sistahly Love 4 2 perfect gentlemen:heart:
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  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watch it So'ja

    Don't be startin no mess up in heah.....
    You don't ask a sistah to marry you and then expect her to wait 17 to 21 years....
    Especially with the shortage of good brothas out there.
    Now you keep you butt right there....
    I'm going for the broom......you just be heah ready to jump it:D

    bowing in your praise and kissing the back of your hand....Uhm, now thats sweet :blush:

    Madd Love & Respect :love:
    Your Lady Street So'ja
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well said...every day is a war in the slums, the ghettos, the projects..all over the world...a daily battle to survive....but the ones who can make a difference just keep on acing like ostriches...puttin their head in the sand and thinkin the problem has disappeared ....time to take a reality check..all over the world....

    K
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *astounded*

    luv it when "cocobuttaskyns* bring "apple pie" to the table...

    nicely done.

    jh.
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you 2 r too much. but on the real, coco, this piece is tyght, gurl. i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin', poetess.
     
  10. epiphany

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    There it is Coco.......

    American as Apple pie......NOT I


    African American is I.............well done Coco....well done!

    Epiphany:heart:
     
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