Black Poetry : Ambiguous

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  1. StarDancer

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    I have visions of you….
    Prophetic premonitions parade in my mind
    So frequently and so boisterously that I can’t concentrate
    On anything else
    But you.

    Tis blasphemy…surely…
    Because we both know
    That you do not deserve such adoration
    From a woman like me…
    Someone that loves totally…
    Blindly…
    Unabashed and unyieldingly…
    With every colored fiber in my tortured, blackened soul…
    No…you don’t deserve that at all…

    And yet….
    Knowing this…

    You still hover about me
    Crowding my used to be private reverie,
    Smothering my used to be impenetrable veneer,
    Murdering my used to be identity
    And converting me
    Into this sub human mindless ditz that I don’t even
    Understand or wish to come to know…
    Threatening idly that one day I will most certainly go
    And leave this life
    Leave this existence
    Leave your pathetic *** behind,
    But falling into hysterics when you turn your back to me
    And tune a deaf ear to my demands…
    Openly laughing at my despair and tears as I crumble before you
    Begging for you to just love me…
    To let me love you…
    To just….****…just fu!king give US a chance….
    I will be anything you want…be everything you need….
    Make you the center of my universe and worship you
    with childlike blind and total awe
    I would….

    ****…there I go again…
    Sorry distinguished ladies and gentlemen of the world…
    The last thing you need to see or hear
    Is another woman losing her sanity…
    No dignity…
    By chasing after a no account
    Useless…
    Trifling…
    Cheating…
    Idiotic…
    Needy…
    Pathetic…
    Beautiful …
    Poetic…
    Tortured….
    Complicated…
    Sexy…
    Inspired genius…the love of my love…
    The root of my destruction…
    Will I ever figure this muddled mess out?

    No…you don’t deserve me
    Or what I have to give,
    But you definitely have me
    And without you I don’t know if I can live…
    I hate you so **** much that it only makes me love you harder…
    Because
    The best things are never easy…
    And…to give up now…would be a grave mistake…
    To leave you when your about to get on top of your game would just be plain foolish
    Because then of the fruits of my labor, some other girl would then partake…
    Ain’t that what you always say…or ain’t that what I always heard…?

    I don’t know….
    I don’t know anything anymore…
    Except…
    That…
    Well…
    I just love you too **** much…
    And if I cared about myself at all…
    I would walk the hell away from you
    And never bother to look back.
    Please…
    Don’t let me just walk away.

    Copyright ©Charmin2002:kiss:
     
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    Whew !!!!!!

    Go 'Head On Now Gurl !!!!!!!!!!

    :toast:

    I'm skuuurrrrd of YOUUU !!!!! :lol:

    Welcome Again To The Family !!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeee!! let it be known by all .......wow! dis piece
    is masterful
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hi StarDancer,
    Nice to read you. :)

    This is Badd and Tyte!


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    StarDancer Member MEMBER

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    hey all!

    thank you so much for the love.....
    glad someone out there could decipher my confusion...!!

    **beaming**
     
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    StarD.


    ...not only can i decipher your confusion
    i am LIVING your confusion my sista! :)
    & mos def lovin' the way you put it down!

    Welcome Poet! you are most certain-ly
    amongst family (& don't tell 'em i said it
    but... they're pretty good company! :D )

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my oh my oh my

    Sho nuff get out of my head ! are you some where in an alternate reality living my life ?
    this is so familiar and very tight
    two snaps and a shimmy!
    lol
    :)
     
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    StarDancer Member MEMBER

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    oooo weeeeee!

    thank you all for the responses errryboty!!

    **floating**

    :toast::heart:
     
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