Black Poetry : amber rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 24, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...umm, this is rough, but posted...
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    as i peek outside
    our camping tent
    nestle in a forest
    hide-a-way
    nature begins to
    serenade peaceful
    thoughts moving
    within

    the aroma of pine
    is therapy for my
    overworked body
    i relax lying on my
    stomach and propped
    on my elbows...
    i am taking nature in...

    as the sun moves
    towards it destination
    for the night
    it leaves streak of gold
    orange...amber
    reminding me of how
    i wished the day would
    never end...

    tears of joy fall from
    my brown eyes
    in unison with the sky
    ...it weeps...
    ...amber rain...

    at that moment
    i feel your reassuring
    hand tenderly rub my
    back...
    "what a beautiful end to
    our special day"
    ...you say

    i smile
    you kiss my lips
    "i could spend eternity with
    you...like this"
    ...you whisper
    i love you...i know
    you say..."i love you, MsD~"

    we lay
    embraced
    as we enjoy
    the amber rain...

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YESSSS!!!!!!
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and I repeat, "YESSSSSSS"!!!

    thank you MsD


    A
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Yesss Yesss Yesssss !!

    Thanks for taking me camp'n wit yall!!

    :)
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Allow me to add mine.....YYYYEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see now...

    y'all so sweeeet!

    luv y'all!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and again wooooo YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
    gurl dis was da bomb
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww yes
    this is very nice
    wow
    Peac
     
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