Black Poetry : Amazing grace..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its long sorry fam thoughts in motion...
    rambling tryin to understand as it just hit me to just write
    the ones who read thank you much love to you.....Angel

    What u do lose ya soul
    Define Hope
    Find da faith in what was…
    Stay above the ground
    Hold ya own
    Make it thru the night
    Don’t you see the light
    For it shines before you..
    Just gotta want it…
    Feel the power of my pen..
    Scribing and flowin
    Is all I know….
    Have problems savin myself..
    But my words are my power tonight that is….
    How do I help you pull thru….
    Callin out in my pain…
    Tryin to deal but the game
    Always show in shame..
    Hurtin
    breakin
    Stickin
    Meltin…
    and whose to blame…
    slappin
    dyin
    just plain pain…
    insides black
    I cant leave the sorrow until I tell the tale….
    In so much pain as I walk this earth…
    Mind wonderin….
    Heart fallen lost and lack of
    tryin to understand
    How life is to work..
    Down on bended knees…
    Amazing grace..
    You lay awake at night tryin to
    feel ya soul as it turns cold
    now ya been told as my
    pen takes this walk….exhale……..
    Across the rivers lookin up amazing
    grace..everything I know is right
    but I got this war goin on in side me..
    willin and dealin
    Like the devils child…but I am saved..
    Don’t to many know this…
    Feel the pain as I flow on
    my own..
    a childs cry
    A mothers cry
    A daughters cry
    Within side my pain burns
    A soul invaded and
    turns it and swing it around…
    my heart
    my love
    and my soul
    is how I begin to roll
    leftin up my head in praise…
    feel me
    understand……. doing my thang..
    working against the evil..but its
    spirits that wanna drag ya down..
    and light open up..as I look above….
    Blind by sight for a moment had
    me standing in time….
    youll make it thru the light
    I lead as you follow
    For the messager came..
    Stop going against the light….
    Walk towards it
    See I feed you what
    lays there before…
    Just open up your eyes my child…
    Feel my embrace
    Know everything will be ok….
    As I take ya hand….know that I care
    and never leave you..
    I just stood as the light left in da wind
    and my soul lifted
    Amazing grace……laid his hand on me..
    Amazing grace
    How sweet it is
    That saved me….
    Its gonna be ok
    Its gonna be ok
    Its gonna be ok
    Once was lost but know
    I found
    Blind but now I see
    Makin thru the light as every
    thing began to come bright
    Walkin towards my light…
    As I take my journey
    I got a story to unfold…
    I cant leave the sorrow until I tell the tale….
    Its gonna be ok
    Its gonna be ok
    Its gonna be ok
    For I know I am stronger then this…but
    I cant leave the sorrow until I tell the tale….

    a blkangel thang :angel1:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this my sister..beleive it will be ok
    much love
    nice one here
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe da emotions
     
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    Continue to be strong... I can feel your heart in this.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bluewater, $$RICH$$ and watzinaname -thank you all for taken time to read my little rambling
    means alot...much love to each and everyone of you....Angel
     
  6. Da1whoownslife

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    mzblkangel, my angel, this too was amazin.... yes, it's going to be okay... and please continue to be strong...... this I felt in my soul....... beautiful
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da read and support....
     
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    :jawdrop: Girl this is just phenomenal. I am feelin every line, bein a veteran of the dark places myself. Keep writing it out, oh yes. Good for you and good for the Destee family too. ;) Much love.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    thanks my sister for feel this one...much love to you
     
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    i'm bringing the magic back, tell the tale, you told it well, now i brush the dust of this old scribe, to bring it back to life, no it never died, for in your heart is where it did abide, and now it hasn't risen, it has rised..........


    hope you enjoy a blast from the past like i did. (i'm gonna bring em back like throw backs :rolling: )
     
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