Black Authors : Amateur author seeks discussion

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  1. Phoenixbutterfly

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    hi

    I am here because I'm a white woman who is writing a mystery with a black protagonist. I want him to be "real" and relatable. Not many authors cross racial lines - lines that shouldn't exist. I want to be able to realistically represent his culture and his mindset which is a tall order since I'm coming from ignorance. I've only had a few friends who were from a different racial background. Those that I've had the pleasure of knowing taught me a great deal. I hope to further add to this.

    Thanks in advance for any and all assistance!
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    Welcome again, glad to have you join us, Phoenixbutterfly.

    Several questions concerning your proposed book:

    Is the Black protagonist male or female?

    (I did see this though - I want to be able to realistically represent his culture and his mindset) ... just being sure by asking.

    Presuming this character is male, is there anything specific about his/her culture and mindset you wish to develop in a mystery novel?


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    Well here's the rundown on his character:

    Hopefully I won't give away too much

    His name is Tobias and he's a detective. This book plays with both race and gender issues so he's not only very dark skinned but also bi. He's a philanderer. As a detective he's a "good ol' boy" per their code but out in his everyday life he is either affected by racism or at least aware of it. I'm not sure if he's active in his community yet... His black identity is still being developed. I'm not interested in portraying him as a stereotypical black man.. Whatever that may be. I want him relatable and real. The way he talks, the way he thinks, the way he views the world. I don't want someone from this community to read it and think "no way was this written by a black author"

    Specifics? I don't know enough to answer that. I'm ignorant of most of what's discussed here. I know that it's different but not exactly sure how to define that difference.
     
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    Never heard of either until now. I'll definitely check into them.
     
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    i want to ask... Hopefully without offending.. Is it disrespectful to describe race (across the board not limited to Tobias) as a flavor in a sexual context? I.e. Chocolate, vanilla, caramel (black, white, Latino) I do this in the thoughts of one character and words of another.
     
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    True. Technically I suppose offending may be par for the course when dealing with gender and race but offending others isn't a goal. I definitely don't want my protagonist offensive to those he's supposed to represent.
     
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    My audience right now are the judges, it's for a contest. I'm not sure who my market will be and I'm hoping that should they choose to publish, they will know the business end. This is my first contest. Publishing under my own power would require intimate knowledge with the business. Something I am aware of but know nothing about yet.
     
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