Black Poetry : Amalgamate rhymes and evaluate minds

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amalgamate rhymes and evaluate minds

    Walk the path of a thug just got out the bathtub home
    And sprung when the phone rung a girl loving my chrome
    Lex wanting strong sex I’m rapping unknown text such
    As pick up lines this chick butt is fine I’m next to touch
    Her heart in search for dark panties it hard to just clutch
    My emotions, “girl your menu is sweet so continue to
    Speak you’re my girlfriend true o an unique date so true
    Crawl on knees like small trees lean in the wind come
    Clean with trend my team is my friend together we drink rum
    And think dumb so we crazy like KFC gravy keep our thumbs
    Up licking our fingers eat chicken and hot wingers taste buds numb
    Yall accept my ladder got steps that matter ill rhymes will climb
    To the tip top of Hip Hop then you can rip shop like Fabulous divine
    So I prop against walls and fence tall hoping to leap over
    And become a complete soldier have become a unique boulder
    In combat older that your habitat my girl still push a baby stroller
    Got fast heat like a gas leak this stuff explode if you
    Puff a load of dynamite lyrics in tight spirits so true
    Faults and mistakes and still walks great like camels
    Hype like enamels pride glossy my ride costly handles
    Like a Lex with the top dropped bets and falsely gambles
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this evaluate da mind of wonders this was hot tight man !!!
     
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    Keep those rhymes rolling rhymebad.
     
  4. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Like a Lex as in Steele...lol!

    Nice drop!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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    very cool flow!

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the responses on this one for real yall
     
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    Tight Write

    I especially like the title.

    PEACE
     
  9. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for th eprops on this one for real yall
     
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