Black Poetry : Am I wrong???

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Queen_Nemesis, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. Queen_Nemesis

    Queen_Nemesis Member MEMBER

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    am i wrong
    for wanting something solid
    for being tired of giving
    for wanting to be alone
    for having so much hate
    for wanting to uncover the masquerade
    for feelings cold concrete instead of softness
    for not caring
    for not relating
    for yearning something out of life
    for wanting to stand on my own 2
    for asking God to SHOW ME THE WAY
    for questioning
    for writing this poem
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the flow
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) this was oh SO right cause you sho aint wrong :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice scribe and all right ...
     
  5. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    never wrong for questioning...and the flow was nice
     
  6. Queen_Nemesis

    Queen_Nemesis Member MEMBER

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    thank you ladies and gentlemen
     
  7. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Was you wrong for writin this tyte flo? H*lllllll naw.....lol... Very nice...
     
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    yes you are....

    for having any hate
    the devil's bate
    you cannot ask God for help
    before the hate starts to disapate
    tru happiness is your fate
    not hate
    no need to deliberate
    release the hate
    and let God create
    love in your heart
    so start to clean the slate
    hope i didn't start a debate
    that's jus how i feel
    and i don't know anything else but being real

    tyte scribe sis...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you were not wrong
    you asked, wow
    this is really nice
    Peace
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, you was not wrong, however sometimes I do find myself asking the same ?'s. Tyte flow, I felt the vibe.

    Much Luv,
    Foxy.........
     
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