Black Poetry : Am I the Woman of your Dreams

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luv: am i the woman of your dream?
    am i the woman you always dream of?
    with my ebony eyes,
    Does it make u happy that I'm pure
    and u'll might be the first name i scream
    when our bodies come togather like a puzzle
    am i the woman of your dreams
    i keep it real wit u
    and i won't neva lie to u
    because i alway speak da truth
    i'm just ur lil gangsta boo
    do i make u happy when
    i say "i love u"
    will i give u an erection
    if i kiss all over your body
    or want to do every position known to man wit u
    that i want u to bring out my inner freak
    Am i the woman of your dreams
    cause we make good conversation
    and i don't have no serious attitude like those other brad
    am i the woman of your dreams,
    or am i just wasting ur time
    wit this dumb *** poem
    tell me now
    cause i really wana know
    because i luv u so much i don't ever wana let u go
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME
    :wave::wave: :wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave:
    :)
    Welcome home my sista
    way to tell him...:)
    Spread the poetic love and give love and you will be JUST fine my sista :grouphug:
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not enough support for a new member
    im feelin u
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, what a woman. Gotta make that dream a reality. Good write.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a writer at 16 years old. Keep sharing your poetic talents.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    flow on....maybe he will hear
    or just tell him
    welcome within
    hope to read more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I think you mean ...wow what an Intelligent girl.
    at 16 she's just a young tender :angel1:

    Gotta make that dream a reality ? ... :nono:
    IN TIME...she'll have plenty of time for :love:
    good writting ...I do agree she has...keep up the good work :wink:
     
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