Black Poetry : Am I The Best?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 15, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i watch your chest rise and fall
    as i try to conquer it all
    i ride out your every movement
    like a flimsy surfboard
    on wave upon wave
    as you grip
    my hips
    and lick your lips
    to savor the taste of my name
    and my nipple tips
    i can tell by your shudder
    there's never been another
    to kiss you right here
    and touch you right there
    to make you sigh
    and moan
    and cry
    and groan
    as jaheim's cd plays in the background
    we tussle on the bed going round and round
    hit from the front the back
    me on top you on top just like that
    whisper sweet things
    as you feel my working
    to bring you to your knees
    as you moan out please
    don't make me, not right now
    but i don't know how
    to stop myself from moving
    slithering and grooving
    up on you
    down on you
    just tell me what to do
    but don't tell me to stop
    so you don't pop
    i can't stop myself from pleasing you
    so if you feel the need to cum, do what you gotta do
    and afterwards i lay upon your chest
    look in your eyes and ask
    Am I The Best? :love:
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much Olakuoto...that compliment is much appreciated.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum... see its cold outside and I'm freezing, but I just got all hot with that...lol Tyte flow, my sistah!
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you poeticlyspeakin...i appreciate it. you think you're burning up.... LOL
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl this was hot....
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mzblkangel...i'm glad you thought so
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your most welcome.....
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you know it!!!!!!!
    this was ill.....really ill.....
    matter fact i'm a give this to somebody for some lessonz...lol

    all i know is that if this aint True love,then i dunno whut is...

    oh--girl where can i find more like you????lol


    one love!!!
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True... :hot: if u were any hotter...I'd melt LOL
    work that brotha out LOL :)
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    whoa....
    what naughty thoughts you have provoked...lol
    me likes dis joint
    peace
    khasm
     
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