Black Poetry : Am I invisible?

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  1. msluciousb

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    I glide into the room.
    Only noted by the scent of my perfume.
    Heads turn but they do not focus unseeing eyes.
    Could it be because I am in disguise.
    Or perhaps they are temporal and I am ethereal.
    Could it be that they sense me, but can not feel...
    Do they know that I am more than real?
    Unlike those painted and vying for attention.
    I exist in a third dimension.
    Luxuriously I listen unseen by physical eyes.
    I gaze openly at every nuance and subtle flirtation.
    A princess with a third eye.
    Am I invisible, cause you know me not?
    Am I invisible cause you touch me not?
    Am I invisible cause I pass through your world,
    and yet I am not of your world.
    Longing sometimes to find pleasusre in those things
    that bring you such joy.
    I relinquished my physical body years ago...
    I exist in the membranes of your brain.
    The memory of a song once sang.
    A dance once danced.
    A chance once chanced...
    A lover once romanced!
    Could it be I am invisible?
    Or is it just that you are blind?
    BJS(C)2003 :sand:
     
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    this was tyte sistah ya pen is awesome
     
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    nice flow....enjoyed da read
     
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    Queen...

    10

    period.


    your brother blak
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smiling over here!

    So glad that you enjoyed it! That is truly what makes me smile.
    As long as I have readers I know I will stay for a long while...
    Blessings on your House! :blush:
     
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    likewise sistah u bring a vibe so sweet and the feelings of emotions
    that be flowin light up the room......thank u for being u :star:
     
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