Black Poetry : Am I Invisibility

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  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    Invisibility is that me
    or is it through your eyes I'm not seen

    Am I Invisible
    or can you see the hurt in my face as I try to walk by with grace
    still reminicing of your taste.

    Am I invisible or can you see the switch in my walk
    as i try to intice you as the other boyz taunt

    Am I Invisibe just loke the crystal stare
    because I want you to come and make my life seem fare

    Oh, you can't see me now
    but soon you will see my inner mystery
    which will no longer filled with the mysery
    you planted in my heart

    I only hope the roots of your plant will be dug up
    and I no longer will be invisible but will be Visible for
    the WORLD to see
    a new flower growing in me

    But will you be invisible to me???
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    talk that talk...sounds like a come-back trail to me.
    we live and learn, :teach: we love and learn :heart: we cry a lot and learn :crying: we die just a little...and from that...we GROW
    liked the way you penned that piece... :cool:
     
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    welcome to destee.com
    nice drop
    hope to see more
    peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey welcome welcome welcome
    to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless u
    some love on this flow welcome to
    the family of peace & bonding
    bring love sho love be love
    tyte scribing
     
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    interesting question...
    nicely posed...
    please share more....welcome
    one love
    khasm
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, welcome to the destee family.....lookin' at this piece I can see a future of many more beautiful pieces such as this......this flow was tyte to deaf.
     
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