Black Poetry : Am I Given IN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IntuitioninMD, Dec 4, 2004.

  1. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    Am I Given IN
    By Seeing HIm tonight

    Am I Given IN
    by being in His Presence

    Am I Given IN
    knowing.. what is on my mind

    Am I Given IN
    by wanting Him by my side

    Am I Given IN
    using BOREDOM as the exCUSE

    Am I Given IN
    TO the temptation of
    knowing that
    he will answer
    ..if I knock

    Am I Given IN
    TO.. Mr. Black Man
    knowing that
    IF I ask him.. too...
    He will say.... YES YOU CAN

    Am I GIven INto
    INsaNity
    because seeing him tonight...
    will definitely be crazy :hearts1:

    I love you Mr. Black Man :ilu:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    not given in or out
    sanity u pose
    but u know ya da
    rare rose
    not about thee man but
    which man u choose
    I hear ya on dis ............
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you "giving in" ..for sharing love with another?
    let it go ...and it'll come back.
     
  4. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    I am not sure... if he feels.. love.. but.. we do always GIVE in to each other..

    It is so scary. It is like having an "inner" body experience... where.. my body decides to leave my mind behind. :) :luvv:
     
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    nice scribe...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I was reading your response to queent, I was thinking, yes, it can be scary. Any time you take a leap of faith, it's scary, because there is no way we will know for sure how it will turn out, despite the most responsible choices. I understand what you are saying, and you conveyed the feeling well.
     
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    it's always scary when tyme to release emotions from the inner core of self
    to another but we go deep and let go and bam ! we fine pure joy and love often
    then none ........
     
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    Go ahead give in. The sweetness is the weakness. Not you. Enjoy time with those who bring joy. Even if its temporary.

    Nothing is lost, time moves on with or without us.
     
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    No treasure missing in the pleasure of kissing, the pressure

    Twisting my mind because of reminiscing can’t measure

    The sweetness, fought back but caught in the act of having

    Sex by my mother oh brother the sparks flew grabbing

    My emotions
     
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    give it up, turn it loose

    You need to give to get and sister, you need to get your love on!!
     
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