Quiet Poetry Lounge : Am I Alone Yet?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by christos, Mar 23, 2005.

  1. christos

    christos Member MEMBER

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    a crowded room
    filled with noise
    spirits fills the air
    ramblin conversations flow
    and egos are for sale.
    clink' of the glasses
    grown men by the masses
    in suits and big degrees
    ease desparate women
    who's tried sinnin'
    but still love men who can't please
    and so im here
    in my head sick of all the glam
    arguin' with myself
    bored to death
    even gettin' cotton mouth
    am i alone yet?
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is deep, i know the feeling... where you just want your space and the world won't let you have it. tight drop fam!!!!

    much love, plain
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic flowz
    welcome to the house of love, Peace & respect
    happy u join us in flow very nice write
    look to read u again soon & spread love around
    welcome from above poet :welldone:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting your own space, a place to be without all the superficial nonsense. Feeling your flow, flow some more. Welcome to destee.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com

    Enjoyed the flow looking forward to much much more.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Oh Gosh! Tell me about! A little quite and alone time, is all the spirit needs sometime!

    I'm feeling this drop!
    Loved it!
     
  7. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when you're alone will those things stop? that's a question i'd answer when there are only 2 people left in the room, me and whoever else it was.......but once i'm alone.................am i truly? beautiful scribe, continue............peace
     
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