Black Poetry : Am-bush

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 14, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i crush the pine fine down nine streets
    cruisin the concrete
    my mind aligned to what can i eat
    chinaman freak
    sidewalk hawks
    5-0 patrol the projects
    like the creme of the earth is supple subjects
    not hoodlum suspects
    break my neck
    as i casually peep
    the crack handouts
    it wasn't nothin
    another summer and i wonda if my man's out
    what's that about
    who can you trust
    bussin my *** in class
    fast as i can think it up
    catch a inklin of heaven
    like Pac's my reverend
    might i ascend one day again
    to drink a cup
    of Hen or Gin
    stirrin the mix in the glass
    with subtle blends
    juices the fruit produces
    part of me like the light
    soothes and darkens my skin
    from death to birth again
    flik my ashes to a cool wind
    from disgust to admiration
    propaganda got me hatin on me
    i get filled with chlorophyll
    apply for real to the wisdom
    to appeal to our children
    and leave my hustlas with a
    forward will
    keepin it movin
    in times
    mirrorin ill
    i see you still
    preserve your name
    and the promises of your pedigree
    to my roots and the youngins
    ahead of me
    bob my head steadily
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a crafty smooth scribe i enjoyed this one
     
  4. Khasm13

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    dude...
    you ripped this flow...
    daps son
    no doubt!
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very dope piece, got me nodding my head...Nice!
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
    like the flow enjoyed the read
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx mzblkangel one love sis

    Appreciate you peepin me out, Rashad..hope you get to rewind me :spin: 1 :spin:

    Sup Khas(m13) *dappin* thanks 'G'

    $$Rich$$ $$Rich$$ $$Rich$$ sup...glad you can diggit

    TheOne- thanx yo...i dig your avatar

    one love

    /antar
     
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