Black Poetry : Alycean Hunterous (new species)

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I searched my biology books
    To understand how the words
    Of two could be formed to
    Create one mind, one body;

    I sought physicians, professors,
    DNA, archeologists to see if
    Maybe, just maybe there’s one
    Who could explain the deepness;

    through all the experts, seminars and
    consultations, the only one who could
    explain the purpose of this creation was
    found in the pages of my theology books;

    you see, when I looked to man to explain
    this gift they studied, researched, dissected,
    and theorized that the only reason for such
    a phenominal occurance could noy be found;

    but they sought their own reasoning without
    looking beyond the levels of actuality, past
    the physical to delve deep into the realms of
    prophets, scribes, apostles, healers and kings;

    instead of looking at the concepts of Darwin
    they should have looked at the praises of
    David for the reasoning of Einstein could
    not surpass the prophecies of Ezekiel;

    they attempted to rationalize the occurance
    by looking at the concept of evolution and
    yet they should have fallen to their knees
    to see it came from the words of revelation;

    some are called to be teacher, some preachers,
    some prophets, some pastors, but you, this new
    form of womb-man have been called to build the
    kingdom of the heavens as Paul instructed Rome;

    can u not see the heaviness of the blessing for your
    pen have reached a new place, shepherding the youth
    to a deeper place of understanding awaiting the time
    to release them into the arms of a new born world;

    I see Hunter, resting on a hill in the field looking over
    the sheep of the herd as Alyce stands behind her braiding
    the new growth of hair and you talk About the herd
    choosing the ones who are called to fill your footprints;

    I see you both walking together, sharing life and love
    Over the fertile soil of Old Teastament days seeking
    The wishes of GOD to be fulfilled through the light
    That shines from the lampstand of your pen;
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo,

    well brother....an ode to two queens equals one word....priceless. This is heavy and definitely well scribed.

    one love,blak
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D'Mo.

    As always, your scribes are top notch!!!!

    Very well done poet!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ and verb,

    thanks for the read gentleman, i am at a place today of writing what i see...
     
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    D-Mo

    I don't even know how to begin to approach this scribe!
    Thank you for such high praise couched within such ecclesiastical beauty and understanding.

    I know I am created anew whenever I drink from the fountains that spring forth from the deep wells in this place. And we all are 'transformed' when our spirits join in the name of 'flow'.

    Humble thanks, D-Mo.


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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce,

    you and hunter bring new meanig to creative license... i am honored to experience oyur scribes... continue to bless us...