Black Poetry : alwayz in my dreams

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see you in my dreams every day
    i want you to know that i stay up all night just thinking about you
    you're alwayz on my mind and i'm still in love with you just the way you're in love with me

    can't get you out of my head although the memories are half dead
    it's like i'm married to you
    and for you my heart aches
    and for you my heart is in pain
    everyday
    my spirit and my soul tells me it's more than i can take
    still i hold on to this hope that somehow you'll stay forever

    can't sleep tonght
    just want to hold you in my arms

    Desert Storm
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after reading your first joynt, i'm thinking you're maddly in love.
    it's a beautifull thing when it's real.

    tyte piece,
    jh.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i know

    thanks for replying.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. eternalprince

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    simple and to the point the way It was intended. perfect.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's that time !

    Beautiful, heartfelt piece with sweetness and longing at the same time. Girrrrrrrrrrrl! Go head!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm

    you must be in..... Like the way you just spread this one out. Coll and crisp.




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  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah gurl

    it's pretty bad
    got me listening to alicia keys, interlude Never Felt This Way i love the hook lol! mslucious i think you might be right, ubzorb, cute! hee hee eternalprince thank u, glad you liked it!
    p.s. the worst thing of it iz that i've been in love with the same person since my first post @ afronet lol & nobody knows it but he & I. we were laughing one day because i said i know everbody thinks we're crazy & don't understand!
    sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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