Black Poetry : ...alwayspeace.

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  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love your peace…

    …& the comforting
    effect it has on me
    is as soothing
    as the rhythm of
    wind blown rain
    splattering gent-ly
    against my bedroom
    windowpane…
    while Miles plays
    on Nefertiti

    your peace…

    is as intoxicating as
    tasting tiny traces
    of you on my lips…
    seconds
    minutes
    hours
    …after we’ve shared
    the perfect kiss

    it…
    wraps around me
    in silent subtlety…
    saturating me in quiet
    ecstasy… then…
    carries me soft-ly
    over the threshold of
    complete…
    …before loving-ly
    caressing me to
    sleep… now replete…

    …subliminal bliss is
    much too weak to
    define the serenity
    that permeates
    your calming vibe
    (in it’s entire-ty)…

    tranquility personified—
    ...that’s what you are
    to me… always...

    & i love your peace.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne, sounds like you have a keeper there...nothing more intoxicating than a peaceful brother...i liked your flow here.
     
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    I like it! Very unique.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very cool
    lovin the flow
     
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    An enjoyable peacefull flow.

    Coco :heart:
     
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    peaceALWAYS...is there any other way?

    loving this.:)
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    b.... nope! ain't no otha way! :) glad you liked it.
    coco.... thank you! BigTime! :wink:
    shazzy.... very cool, indeed! (LOL) & the flow loves you!
    sismoon.... happy you liked it! thanks for stoppin' by!
    red.... yeah. he's aight! :lol: thanks! & i'm overjoyed that
    you enjoyed it!

    itsallLove, chirens!
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherrie.... yep! ALLways... & i DO say so! :D

    itsallLove, chile.
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus anutha' beautiful piece, heyah. yes, indeed. but, you mus kno? ryght? ryght.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne,

    10 (i'm tired of reading fabulous scribes :) )

    yous a bad gurl.

    verb